From 04ae08b3c6fd61aa2503ed18af759fbe01a9ccb3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Stark <david@jdavidstark.com>
Date: Tue, 4 Jan 2022 15:56:14 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Update tyndale-bulletin.csl

Removed duplication of review titles in bibliography.
---
 tyndale-bulletin.csl | 21 ++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tyndale-bulletin.csl b/tyndale-bulletin.csl
index 17f5474319a..3f54c1d4136 100644
--- a/tyndale-bulletin.csl
+++ b/tyndale-bulletin.csl
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@
     <issn>0082-7118</issn>
     <eissn>2752-7042</eissn>
     <summary>Tyndale Bulletin format with full notes and bibliography</summary>
-    <updated>2022-01-04T17:34:29+00:00</updated>
+    <updated>2022-01-04T20:55:21+00:00</updated>
     <rights license="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 License</rights>
     <!-- Tyndale Bulletin style differs from SBLHS2 only rarely (§4.1). The departures are that Tyndale Bulletin uses 
       1) hyphens, rather than en dashes, in page ranges (§§6, 6.3);
       2) insists that DOIs be included where available (§§11.1, 11.3.7); and
-      3) uses British-style quotation mark conventions (§§8.1, 11.1, 11.6.6&#8211;11.3.8). N.B.: §11.3.8 shows punctuation coming outside the quotation mark, rather than inside. But it needs to be confirmed that this isn't a mistake in the Tyndale Bulletin style guide (as is, e.g., the italicized comma after the book title in that section's examples). -->
+      3) uses British-style quotation mark conventions (§§8.1, 11.1, 11.6.6-11.3.8). N.B.: §11.3.8 shows punctuation coming outside the quotation mark, rather than inside. But it needs to be confirmed that this isn't a mistake in the Tyndale Bulletin style guide (as is, e.g., the italicized comma after the book title in that section's examples). -->
   </info>
   <locale xml:lang="en-GB">
     <style-options punctuation-in-quote="true"/>
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
       <else-if type="bill book graphic legal_case legislation motion_picture report song" match="any">
         <text variable="title" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
       </else-if>
-      <!-- Include "review of " prefix, italicize the book titles in untitled book reviews per §§11.3.8&#8211;11.3.9. -->
+      <!-- Include "review of " prefix, italicize the book titles in untitled book reviews per §§11.3.8-11.3.9. -->
       <else-if variable="reviewed-author">
         <choose>
           <!-- Include the review title, if avaialable, in quotation marks per §11.3.8. -->
@@ -295,16 +295,19 @@
       <else-if type="bill book graphic legal_case legislation motion_picture report song" match="any">
         <text variable="title" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
       </else-if>
-      <!-- Include the reviewed author for book reviews per §§11.3.8&#8211;11.3.9. -->
+      <!-- Include the reviewed author for book reviews per §§11.3.8-11.3.9. -->
       <else-if variable="reviewed-author">
         <choose>
           <if variable="reviewed-title">
             <text variable="title" quotes="true" suffix=", " text-case="title"/>
-            <text variable="reviewed-title" font-style="italic" prefix="review of " text-case="title"/>
+            <text variable="reviewed-title" font-style="italic" prefix="review of " suffix=", by " text-case="title"/>
+            <names variable="reviewed-author"/>
           </if>
+          <else>
+            <text variable="title" font-style="italic" prefix="Review of " suffix=", by " text-case="title"/>
+            <names variable="reviewed-author"/>
+          </else>
         </choose>
-        <text variable="title" font-style="italic" prefix="Review of " suffix=", by " text-case="title"/>
-        <names variable="reviewed-author"/>
       </else-if>
       <else>
         <text variable="title" quotes="true" text-case="title"/>
@@ -709,8 +712,8 @@
                   </if>
                   <else>
                     <group delimiter=" ">
-                      <label variable="locator" form="short"/>
-                      <text variable="locator"/>
+                        <label variable="locator" form="short"/>
+                        <text variable="locator"/>
                     </group>
                   </else>
                 </choose>