diff --git a/tyndale-bulletin.csl b/tyndale-bulletin.csl
index 75e09832361..f40a1423d0a 100644
--- a/tyndale-bulletin.csl
+++ b/tyndale-bulletin.csl
@@ -16,22 +16,24 @@
     <issn>0082-7118</issn>
     <eissn>2752-7042</eissn>
     <summary>Tyndale Bulletin format with full notes and bibliography</summary>
-    <updated>2022-01-04T20:55:21+00:00</updated>
+    <updated>2022-01-11T14:38:09+00:00</updated>
     <rights license="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 License</rights>
-    <!-- Tyndale Bulletin style differs from SBLHS2 only rarely (§4.1). The departures are that Tyndale Bulletin uses 
-      1) hyphens, rather than en dashes, in page ranges (§§6, 6.3);
-      2) insists that DOIs be included where available (§§11.1, 11.3.7); and
-      3) uses British-style quotation mark conventions (§§8.1, 11.1, 11.6.6-11.3.8). N.B.: §11.3.8 shows punctuation coming outside the quotation mark, rather than inside. But it needs to be confirmed that this isn't a mistake in the Tyndale Bulletin style guide (as is, e.g., the italicized comma after the book title in that section's examples). -->
+    <!-- Tyndale Bulletin style differs from SBLHS2 only rarely (§4.1). The departures are that Tyndale Bulletin 
+      1) insists that DOIs be included where available (§§11.1, 11.3.7) and
+      2) uses British-style quotation mark conventions (§§8.1, 11.1, 11.6.6-11.3.8). -->
   </info>
   <locale xml:lang="en-GB">
-    <style-options punctuation-in-quote="true"/>
+    <!-- Punctuate outside quotations per the January 2022 update to the style guide. -->
+    <style-options punctuation-in-quote="false"/>
     <terms>
       <term name="collection-editor" form="verb">edited by</term>
       <term name="collection-editor" form="verb-short">ed.</term>
       <term name="editor" form="verb-short">ed.</term>
       <term name="editortranslator" form="verb-short">ed. and trans.</term>
       <term name="editortranslator" form="verb">edited and translated by</term>
-      <term name="page-range-delimiter">-</term>
+      <!-- Use en dash in page ranges per the January 2022 update to the style guide. -->
+      <term name="page-range-delimiter">–</term>
+      <term name="review-of">review of</term>
       <term name="section" form="short">
         <single>§</single>
         <multiple>§§</multiple>
@@ -265,21 +267,22 @@
       <else-if type="bill book graphic legal_case legislation motion_picture report song" match="any">
         <text variable="title" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
       </else-if>
-      <!-- Include "review of " prefix, italicize the book titles in untitled book reviews per §§11.3.8-11.3.9. -->
+      <!-- Include "review of" prefix, italicize the book titles in untitled book reviews per §§11.3.8-11.3.9. -->
       <else-if variable="reviewed-author">
         <choose>
           <!-- Include the review title, if avaialable, in quotation marks per §11.3.8. -->
           <if variable="reviewed-title">
-            <group delimiter=", ">
+            <group delimiter=" ">
               <text variable="title" quotes="true" suffix=", " text-case="title"/>
-              <group delimiter=" ">
-                <text term="review-of" font-style="italic"/>
-                <text variable="reviewed-title" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
-              </group>
+              <text term="review-of"/>
+              <text variable="reviewed-title" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
             </group>
           </if>
           <else>
-            <text variable="title" font-style="italic" prefix="review of " text-case="title"/>
+            <group delimiter=" ">
+              <text term="review-of"/>
+              <text variable="title" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
+            </group>
           </else>
         </choose>
       </else-if>
@@ -304,13 +307,25 @@
       <else-if variable="reviewed-author">
         <choose>
           <if variable="reviewed-title">
-            <text variable="title" quotes="true" suffix=", " text-case="title"/>
-            <text variable="reviewed-title" font-style="italic" prefix="review of " suffix=", by " text-case="title"/>
-            <names variable="reviewed-author"/>
+            <group delimiter=" ">
+              <text variable="title" quotes="true" suffix="," text-case="title"/>
+              <text term="review-of"/>
+              <text variable="reviewed-title" font-style="italic" suffix="," text-case="title"/>
+              <names variable="reviewed-author">
+                <label form="verb" suffix=" "/>
+                <name and="text"/>
+              </names>
+            </group>
           </if>
           <else>
-            <text variable="title" font-style="italic" prefix="Review of " suffix=", by " text-case="title"/>
-            <names variable="reviewed-author"/>
+            <group delimiter=" ">
+              <text term="review-of" text-case="capitalize-first"/>
+              <text variable="title" font-style="italic" suffix=", " text-case="title"/>
+              <names variable="reviewed-author">
+                <label form="verb" suffix=" "/>
+                <name and="text"/>
+              </names>
+            </group>
           </else>
         </choose>
       </else-if>
@@ -337,14 +352,17 @@
       <else-if type="bill book graphic legal_case legislation motion_picture report song" match="any">
         <text variable="title" form="short" font-style="italic" text-case="title"/>
       </else-if>
-      <!-- For short citations, use the short review title if available. Otherwise, use a "review of " prefix, italicize the short book title per §11.3.8. -->
+      <!-- For short citations, use the short review title if available. Otherwise, use a "review of" prefix, italicize the short book title per §11.3.8. -->
       <else-if variable="reviewed-author">
         <choose>
           <if variable="reviewed-title">
             <text variable="title" quotes="true" text-case="title"/>
           </if>
           <else>
-            <text variable="title" font-style="italic" form="short" prefix="review of " text-case="title"/>
+            <group delimiter=" ">
+              <text term="review-of"/>
+              <text variable="title" font-style="italic" form="short" text-case="title"/>
+            </group>
           </else>
         </choose>
       </else-if>