diff --git a/docs/iris/src/whatsnew/contributions_2.0/incompatiblechange_2017-Oct-18_remove-exp-ff.txt b/docs/iris/src/whatsnew/contributions_2.0/incompatiblechange_2017-Oct-18_remove-exp-ff.txt
index 9e6da8ac27..a60b18e9e2 100644
--- a/docs/iris/src/whatsnew/contributions_2.0/incompatiblechange_2017-Oct-18_remove-exp-ff.txt
+++ b/docs/iris/src/whatsnew/contributions_2.0/incompatiblechange_2017-Oct-18_remove-exp-ff.txt
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   Note that there is no direct replacment for
   ```:meth:iris.experimental.fieldsfile.load```, which specifically performed
   fast loading from _either_ PP or FF files.
-  Instead, please enable `:meth:iris.fileformats.um.structured_um_loading` and
-  within that context call `:meth:iris.load`, or the format-specific
-  `:meth:iris.fileformats.pp.load_cubes` or
+  Instead, please see `:meth:iris.fileformats.um.structured_um_loading`:  This
+  enables structured loading within the generic `:meth:iris.load` call, or the
+  format-specific `:meth:iris.fileformats.pp.load_cubes` or
   `:meth:iris.fileformats.um.load_cubes`.