diff --git a/en-US/D.xml b/en-US/D.xml index a9f062e..206a541 100644 --- a/en-US/D.xml +++ b/en-US/D.xml @@ -87,15 +87,8 @@ data store, datastore - n. Use the two-word form. + n. Write as two words, except in a VMware context where the one-word form is required. - - Marketing Publications Exception - - In marketing publications, the one-word form is recommended. - - - @@ -189,7 +182,7 @@ dialog box - n. Use "dialog box" (not "dialog", "dialogue", "dialogue box", or "window"), to refer to an element that is displayed for a user to interact with a graphical user interface. + n. Use "dialog box" (not "dialog", "dialogue", or "dialogue box"), to refer to an element that is displayed for a user to interact with a graphical user interface. Use this term regardless of whether a dialog box is modal, where the user must respond to a prompt before the main content of the interface is enabled again, or is non-modal, where the user can continue interacting with the main content when the dialog box is open. diff --git a/en-US/Design.xml b/en-US/Design.xml index d67452b..4f28c84 100644 --- a/en-US/Design.xml +++ b/en-US/Design.xml @@ -215,9 +215,9 @@
- Figures, Illustrations, and Screen Captures + Figures, Illustrations, and Screenshots - Refer to the Figures section in the IBM Style Guide for general advice about using figures, illustrations, and screen captures. + Refer to the Figures section in the IBM Style Guide for general advice about using figures, illustrations, and screenshots. The following specific conventions apply to using captions and callouts with figures in Red Hat technical documentation, and are generally recommended. @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ Preferred Approach to Starting Applications from the Desktop - To start gedit, press the Super key to enter the Activities Overview, type gedit, and then press Enter. + To start gedit, press the Super key to enter the Activities Overview, type gedit, and then press Enter. @@ -1168,8 +1168,15 @@ STEP 14: COMMIT ...output omitted... localhost/nexus:latest
Using Non-breaking Spaces + + + The following guidance about using non-breaking spaces applies only to the Red Hat company name and to Red Hat products. + Do not use non-breaking spaces with other companies' product names. + + + - Use a non-breaking space in the following situations to avoid a break across lines: + To keep text together on the same line, use a non-breaking space in the following situations: @@ -1224,9 +1231,6 @@ STEP 14: COMMIT ...output omitted... localhost/nexus:latest Non-breaking spaces are not needed elsewhere in a product name and might cause undesirable line-breaking behavior. In particular, do not use non-breaking spaces between extended components of Red Hat product names. For example, "Red Hat Enterprise Linux OpenStack Platform" does not require a non-breaking space between any of the words after "Red Hat". - - Do not use non-breaking spaces with other companies' product names. -
diff --git a/en-US/Grammar.xml b/en-US/Grammar.xml index 712e334..56e9a69 100644 --- a/en-US/Grammar.xml +++ b/en-US/Grammar.xml @@ -416,6 +416,14 @@ The Start button, which you can find in the bottom left corner of your screen (also activated by the "Windows key" on your keyboard, the one between the Ctrl and Alt keys), provides a central starting point for applications and tasks, and can be customized according to your individual preferences so that it presents menu items relevant to you instead of presenting the standard items that come with the default installation of the operating system, items which, in my opinion, are irrelevant for most users these days who really only need access to an internet browser such as Google Chrome or Mozilla Firefox. + + The following paragraph is a suggested improvement to the previous long sentence: + + + The Start button provides a starting point for any applications or tasks on your Windows system. + Either click Start or press the Windows key to activate the Start menu. + You can customize the Start menu to suit your own preferences. + Preposition at the End of a Sentence diff --git a/en-US/Language.xml b/en-US/Language.xml index 9ad6b78..f27ce62 100644 --- a/en-US/Language.xml +++ b/en-US/Language.xml @@ -1237,11 +1237,6 @@ - - Tab through the dialog box. Set the tab. Move the tab on the ruler. How to show or hide tab characters. Select the tab. - Use the tab key to move through the dialog box. Set the tab stop. Move the tab mark on the ruler. To show or hide tab characters in Vim, use the /\t and noh commands. Select the View tab in the Options dialog box. - - To create another administrator, click File > New. diff --git a/en-US/Punctuation.xml b/en-US/Punctuation.xml index d4baa12..841e9cc 100644 --- a/en-US/Punctuation.xml +++ b/en-US/Punctuation.xml @@ -945,6 +945,11 @@ PLAY [Gather and display facts for managed nodes] **************************** . Period; dot (when not referring to punctuation) + + + | + Pipe character + + diff --git a/en-US/S.xml b/en-US/S.xml index 7c72375..bd073ff 100644 --- a/en-US/S.xml +++ b/en-US/S.xml @@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ shebang - n. Refers to the character sequence consisting of the number sign and exclamation mark (#!) at the beginning of a script. Do not use hashbang or pound-bang or other variations. + n. Refers to the character sequence consisting of the number sign and exclamation point (#!) at the beginning of a script. Do not use hashbang or pound-bang or other variations. diff --git a/en-US/Translation.xml b/en-US/Translation.xml index fff4ae9..b12d4ba 100644 --- a/en-US/Translation.xml +++ b/en-US/Translation.xml @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ - Navigation or similar instructions (such as "Navigate to Menu -> Submenu"). + Navigation or similar instructions (such as "Go to Menu -> Submenu"). @@ -100,6 +100,11 @@ Multiple paragraphs, or sentences that wrap to two or more lines. + + + Other sections where your deliverables might benefit from more spacing between list items, for example a list of objectives in a training course. + + Use a list with compact spacing in all other cases.