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discuss: community review of improved apisix-website on copywriting #450
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@1502shivam-singh your redesign of our website is really cool~what particularly attracted me was the middle section of the product description and Learn from developers parts. and it would be better to adjust the layout of the first screen or enrich the content together with the last part of the page: Be a part of building APISIX |
Thanks @liuxiran for the review. Here that flow infographic on the right animates going down, with an interaction that a little bump follows the movement of the GitHub invite section - The sphere rotates and is actually interactable by mouse, you can rotate it with mouse drags. I see some misalignments in your shot in this one. Also something I noticed - Now for providing some perspective here, I have tried keeping a minimalistic and clean design here, given the seriousness of the product APISIX. Please match-up if same layout is visible to you too and whether animations and interactions are functioning or not. |
Might be an overkill 😅, but please bear with me on this, could you check out this recorded video of the site for matching up layout and interactions recorded-site.mp4 |
Nice design @1502shivam-singh! Do you mind creating a markdown version of all the text in the new design and create a not-merge PR for it. I think the text part review could be easier with that. Some suggestions from my preference 🤣
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Woh, really nice suggestion, you would then be able to provide changes in a better way using github UI. Excellent idea, on it. Also to avoid fiasco with the actual apisix-website repo, I would make a PR on my own repo, and will share link here.
Okay, i guess pulling the etcd cluster little bit down to align with bottom edge APISIX block should do. Agreed with the latter.
Noted. I would say a comma maybe, but yeah i got you. On the screenshot, yeah on it, I guess compression did hurt it too much.
Hmm, i was actually referencing the dual ability of code and drag and drop of APISIX. You are right, this one actually needs copywriting changes, like to -
The perspective I needed, thanks. Okay, need to modify this one. How about -
Oops missed this. Earlier I thought of a red link as usually seen elsewhere, but yeah a button seems more viable Thanks for the detailed review, will share PR link here. |
Check out this PR if you want to review the copywriting - 1502shivam-singh/apisix-website-redesign#11 |
I believe the copywriting changing all looks good to me! Besides, maybe you could move the PR here in this repo so more people could notice that |
Done, checkout #477 |
* feat: add publish status to route in manager api * fix: update publish and offline route * feat: add route publish test module * fix: synchronize content for route publish/offline
* feat: preview pluginchart (apache#456) * feat: added pluginchart preview in route step4 * feat: change PluginChart to PluginOrchestration * add tools to check ASF headers in code files. (apache#454) * chore: remove unnecessary license file (apache#462) * remove unnecessary license file * remove unnecessary license file for `api7 dashboard` * Increase the checking of .conf and .toml files. And delete the redundant configuration of the ASF-Release.cfg file. (apache#461) * Increase the checking of .conf and .toml files. * Skip the check of dag-to-lua-1.1/README.md file * Put the "run Makefile" check before "get lua lib". * Put the "run Makefile" check before "get lua lib". * Put the "run Makefile" check before "get lua lib". Co-authored-by: lin <lin@MBPro.local> * ci: Add lint (apache#455) Co-authored-by: Rapiz <code@rapiz.me> * Feat: dashboard support route group (apache#433) * feat: route group UI * feat(route-ui): add routegroup when create route * fix: add routegroup to route list * fix: support add routegroup together with route * fix: route path define error * feat: trigger redeploy * fix: update i18n key Co-authored-by: 琚致远 <juzhiyuan@apache.org> * feature:Independent license check operation file. (apache#465) * feat: support ungroup in manager api (apache#460) * feat: support ungroup in manager api * fix: synchronize route group to route * fix: update test case * feat: add publish status to route in manager api (apache#450) * feat: add publish status to route in manager api * fix: update publish and offline route * feat: add route publish test module * fix: synchronize content for route publish/offline * feat(route): add publish and offline to route (apache#451) * feat(route): add publish and offline to route * feat: trigger redeploy * feat: trigger redeploy * Update Create.tsx * fix: update refer to the code review * fix: init status default value * fix: add a help msg to status Form.Item Co-authored-by: 琚致远 <juzhiyuan@apache.org> * feat: remove netlify (apache#472) * fix: host should not be required (apache#477) * feat: added new plugin dependency (apache#475) * feat: added new plugin dependency * feat: omit shadow var * feat: omit shadow var * fix: host should not be required (apache#479) * fix: host should not be required * feat: remove required rule * feat: Route debug (apache#485) * feat: new api get route and apisix url * feat: online debug * fix: update refer to the review, fix logical error as well * fix: rename getRouteWithApisixUrl * feat: update plugin (apache#482) * feat: improve route (apache#483) * feat: improve step1 * feat: improve step2 * feat: improve createStep4 * feat: improve transform * fix: event loop * feat: clean code * fix: lost route_group info when enable redirect * feat: UI improve * fix: checkHostWithSSL with empty hosts * Update Create.tsx Co-authored-by: Firstsawyou <52862365+Firstsawyou@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: nic-chen <33000667+nic-chen@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: lin <lin@MBPro.local> Co-authored-by: Rapiz <contact@rapiz.me> Co-authored-by: Rapiz <code@rapiz.me> Co-authored-by: liuxiran <belovedxixi@126.com> Co-authored-by: 琚致远 <juzhiyuan@apache.org>
Hi all, just finished up with my GSoC project of improving the apisix-website (Redesign and code), would be happy to receive reviews from you all, specifically on copywriting and minor issues like broken links (if any) etc.
Here is the website - https://apisix-re.netlify.app/
Just to mention, all the interactions and animations (WebGL, CSS) you see on this website are my own, implemented from scratch in code. Clarifying for the sake of copyright issues, if any.
I am open to suggestions/changes in copywriting based on reviews by the community.
Hope you like this new perspective of Apache APISIX :)
cc @juzhiyuan , @Yiyiyimu
(If you are aware of community members that might be free/willing to review please mention them, posting here as last time I posted on mailing-list it good mixed and lost with the other mails)
EDIT : For easier review of copywriting check out this PR - #477
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