News359: edits to Gustavojfe section

Author: harding

_posts/en/newsletters/2025-06-20-newsletter.md

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ repo], and [BINANAs][binana repo]._
   view the amount before passing it to the `payoffer` RPC. The latter is
   extended to accept an amount specified in a fiat currency.
 
-- [LDK #3817][] rolls back support for attributable failures (see Newsletter
+- [LDK #3817][] rolls back support for [attributable failures][topic attributable failures] (see Newsletter
   [#349][news349 attributable]) by placing it under a test-only flag. This
   disables the peer penalization logic and removes the feature TLV from failure
   [onion messages][topic onion messages]. Nodes that hadn’t upgraded yet were
@@ -147,14 +147,14 @@ repo], and [BINANAs][binana repo]._
 
 - [LDK #3623][] extends [peer storage][topic peer storage] (see Newsletter
   [#342][news342 peer]) to provide automatic, encrypted peer backups. Each
-  block, `ChainMonitor` packages a versioned, timestamped, and serialized
-  `ChannelMonitor` data into an `OurPeerStorage` blob. Then, it encrypts the
+  block, `ChainMonitor` packages the data from a versioned, timestamped, and serialized
+  `ChannelMonitor` structure into an `OurPeerStorage` blob. Then, it encrypts the
   data and raises a `SendPeerStorage` event to relay the blob as a
   `peer_storage` message to every channel peer. Additionally, `ChannelManager`
   is updated to handle `peer_storage_retrieval` requests by triggering a new
   blob send.
 
-- [BTCPay Server #6755][] enhances the [coin selection][topic coin selection]
+- [BTCPay Server #6755][] enhances the coin control
   user interface with new minimum and maximum amount filters, before and after
   creation date filters, a help section for the filters, a "select all" UTXO
   checkbox, and large page size options (100, 200 or 500 UTXOs).