Merge pull request #10 from mongodb-developer/ljhaywar-patch-2

Update 01_connect_database.ipynb

Author: dfreniche

javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "## Select the Javascript Kernel\n",
+    "## Select the JavaScript Kernel\n",
     "\n",
-    "To run the code cells in these notebooks you need to select the appropriate kernel (programming language). In this case is Javascript. Click on the `Select Kernel` button at the top right, then `Jupyter Kernel` > `Deno`"
+    "To run the code cells in these notebooks, you need to select the appropriate kernel (programming language). In this case, we'll use a JavaScript kernel. Click on the `Select Kernel` button at the top right, then `Jupyter Kernel` > `Deno`"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
    "source": [
     "## Set your connection String below\n",
     "\n",
-    "We can just connect to `localhost` as this devcontainer is also running a MongoDB instance with some data, or you can connect to your own Atlas cluster just changing the `connectionString` below."
+    "We can connect to the database hosted on `localhost` as this devcontainer is running a MongoDB instance with some data. Alternatively, you can connect to your own Atlas cluster by changing the `connectionString` below."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
    "source": [
     "## Send a Hello command\n",
     "\n",
-    "The `hello()` command returns database server details for the backend MongoDB database used in this workshop."
+    "The `hello()` command returns database server details for the MongoDB database."
    ]
   },
   {