From a28ac277067dcafb8b5dacaa52f49e7583becb53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lauren Schaefer Date: Fri, 12 Sep 2025 10:29:24 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Update 00_open_mongodb.ipynb Copy changes --- javascript/00_open_mongodb.ipynb | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/javascript/00_open_mongodb.ipynb b/javascript/00_open_mongodb.ipynb index bc09711..ee7b3b0 100644 --- a/javascript/00_open_mongodb.ipynb +++ b/javascript/00_open_mongodb.ipynb @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ "source": [ "# Open MongoDB Using the MongoDB Extension\n", "\n", - "- click on the MongoDB extension on the side panel\n", - "- to connect to the local database, click on ‘Library DB’ in the list of connections on the left side.\n", + "- Click on the MongoDB extension on the side panel\n", + "- To connect to the local database, click on ‘Library DB’ in the list of connections on the left side.\n", "\n", "We're using this connection string:\n", "\n", @@ -34,10 +34,10 @@ "source": [ "## Open the library database\n", "\n", - "- open the library database\n", - "- open the books collection\n", - "- click on Documents\n", - "- open a document" + "- Open the library database\n", + "- Open the books collection\n", + "- Click on Documents\n", + "- Open a document" ] } ], From d3d430df06502807bbd989b162b7f3f893198c68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lauren Schaefer Date: Fri, 12 Sep 2025 10:36:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] Update 01_connect_database.ipynb Copyedits --- javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb b/javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb index 98e442d..97c3b05 100644 --- a/javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb +++ b/javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb @@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ "cell_type": "markdown", "metadata": {}, "source": [ - "## Select the Javascript Kernel\n", + "## Select the JavaScript Kernel\n", "\n", - "To run the code cells in these notebooks you need to select the appropriate kernel (programming language). In this case is Javascript. Click on the `Select Kernel` button at the top right, then `Jupyter Kernel` > `Deno`" + "To run the code cells in these notebooks, you need to select the appropriate kernel (programming language). In this case, we'll use a JavaScript kernel. Click on the `Select Kernel` button at the top right, then `Jupyter Kernel` > `Deno`" ] }, { @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ "source": [ "## Set your connection String below\n", "\n", - "We can just connect to `localhost` as this devcontainer is also running a MongoDB instance with some data, or you can connect to your own Atlas cluster just changing the `connectionString` below." + "We can connect to the database hosted on `localhost` as this devcontainer is running a MongoDB instance with some data. Alternatively, you can connect to your own Atlas cluster by changing the `connectionString` below." ] }, { @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ "source": [ "## Send a Hello command\n", "\n", - "The `hello()` command returns database server details for the backend MongoDB database used in this workshop." + "The `hello()` command returns database server details for the MongoDB database." ] }, { From 4e2ee1b70dade1f0e12a33dd23149a695f5f2f49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lauren Schaefer Date: Fri, 12 Sep 2025 12:59:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Update 11_find_arrays.ipynb Copy changes --- javascript/11_find_arrays.ipynb | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/javascript/11_find_arrays.ipynb b/javascript/11_find_arrays.ipynb index 70a9c96..6798988 100644 --- a/javascript/11_find_arrays.ipynb +++ b/javascript/11_find_arrays.ipynb @@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ "source": [ "## Don't make this mistake!\n", "\n", - "This will try to find books that have two genres and their names are exactly these and in that order! It is comparing the whole array! Usually we want to search inside the array." + "The query below will try to find books that have exactly two genres (Poetry and Fiction) in the designated order. The query looks for an exact match of the array. Usually we want to search inside the array." ] }, { From d99c6b46c0475437da16e2b0a2a7721e0c76cdca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lauren Schaefer Date: Fri, 12 Sep 2025 13:20:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Update 40_delete.ipynb Copy --- javascript/40_delete.ipynb | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/javascript/40_delete.ipynb b/javascript/40_delete.ipynb index ec6995e..cfd972e 100644 --- a/javascript/40_delete.ipynb +++ b/javascript/40_delete.ipynb @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ "id": "9f6caab3", "metadata": {}, "source": [ - "### We find the document we just inserted using the `_id` field" + "### Find the book using the `_id` field" ] }, {