Newsletter 12

Author: ozkriff

content/posts/newsletter-012/index.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 +++
 title = "This Month in Rust GameDev #12 - July 2020"
-date = 2020-08-03
+date = 2020-08-06
 transparent = true
-draft = true
+draft = false
 +++
 
 Welcome to the twelfth issue of the Rust GameDev Workgroup’s
@@ -180,13 +180,13 @@ Wonder can be [played in the browser on itch.io][Wonder].
 
 [Vlad Zhukov] shared a video of a WIP multiplayer online strategy game
 where you fight with other players for territory.
-Currently there are two types of resources and 5 types of buildings.
+Currently, there are two types of resources and 5 types of buildings.
 To build on the tile you need to occupy it with your warriors first.
 The player who occupied all enemies' tiles win.
 
 The game is written with [miniquad](https://github.com/not-fl3/miniquad)
 and a custom GUI library.
-Some parts of the game are promised to be open-sourced in future.
+Some parts of the game are promised to be open-sourced in the future.
 Read more about crates used in this project [here][hex-strat-crates].
 
 _Discussions:
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ and drivers.
 This month [versions v0.2.2..v0.2.5][abstreet-releases] were released.
 Some of the updates:
 
-- New random traffic scenario generator that makes people go between
+- A new random traffic scenario generator that makes people go between
   houses and workplaces.
 - New commute pattern explorer tool.
 - New character art to give cutscenes a bit more personality.
@@ -348,8 +348,8 @@ generation system in the worldgen. Main features of the river generator are:
   tweak the process for either precision of the pattern or speed of generation;
 - Rivers are sorted upon intersections, their widths are adjusted, waterfalls
   are formed when necessary;
-- Inflow and outflow directions are recorded for each cell, which allows to
-  follow the river upstream or downstream;
+- Inflow and outflow directions are recorded for each cell, which allows
+  following the river upstream or downstream;
 - Simple yet effective erosion model implemented, which ensures no upwards flows
   are allowed;
 - Each stream has its unique ID, which will later be linked to the stream data;
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ covers the work they did in June and July:
   - Moving from recording the raw texture generated for pixels
     to the post-processed texture from wgpu
     involved a major overhaul, and it proved too glitchy and slow.
-    Hopefully it will be revived later, in the form of recording user inputs.
+    Hopefully, it will be revived later, in the form of recording user inputs.
 - Many structural improvements, such as less glitchy particle
   placement with Bresenham's line algorithm,
   better error handling, and ensuring particles
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ The game is in an early stage of development,
 
 [![fps-game-screenshot](fps-game-2.jpeg)][on-fps-game-2-youtube]
 
-^ _Click to watch a [footage from the game's current state][on-fps-game-2-youtube]._
+^ _Click to watch [footage from the game's current state][on-fps-game-2-youtube]._
 
 On this update, [@pingFromHeaven] talks about the lighting implementation that
 sets the tone for the game, how Rust is good at shortening the debugging
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ July's full weekly devlogs: "This Week In Veloren...":
 [#78](https://veloren.net/devblog-78).
 
 In August, 0.7 will be released. Work will continue on castle and cave
-geneartion. The inaugural episode of the Rust Game Dev podcast will be released,
+generation. The inaugural episode of the Rust Game Dev podcast will be released,
 which features an interview by Veloren developers.
 
 ![Quadrupeds](veloren-quadrupeds.png)
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ The source code [can be found here][tantan-pong-src].
 
 ![vector vs linked list perf](data_oriented_design.svg)
 
-Data-Oriented Design is an approach to program optimisation focused on
+Data-Oriented Design is an approach to program optimization focused on
 considering the features and limitations of the target hardware, and
 carefully controlling the memory layout of data to take advantage of
 those.
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ of Unity C# script components allow third parties to incorporate
 Servo browser windows into Unity scenes.
 
 [A blog post about the project][servo-unity-post] gives a good
-overview of the project goals, capabilities, archtecture, challenges,
+overview of the project goals, capabilities, architecture, challenges,
 and future development plans.
 
 [servo-unity]: https://github.com/MozillaReality/servo-unity
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ for contributing a lot of these features and fixes!
 [miniquad] is a safe and cross-platform rendering library
 focused on portability and low-end platforms support.
 
-This month opengl backend of miniquad was successefully ported to iOS.
+This month opengl backend of miniquad was successfully ported to iOS.
 With this update [macroquad], [good-web-game] and all the games
 build directly with [miniquad] can be run on IOS, Android, WASM,
 Linux, macOS and Windows!
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@ Linux, macOS and Windows!
 
 ![procgen dynamic "grass field"](tuitui-grass-field.jpeg)
 
-^ _[@MacTuitui]'s everyday [nannou] experiement #1274_
+^ _[@MacTuitui]'s everyday [nannou] experiment #1274_
 
 The work is ongoing to validate all the incoming commands and guarantee API safety.
 Special thanks to [@GabrielMajeri] for helping to convert assertions
@@ -1003,7 +1003,7 @@ most LLVM IR to
 [Minecraft data packs](https://minecraft.gamepedia.com/Data_Pack),
 the game's deliberately-limited in-game scripting language. Langcraft
 is entirely language independent, so any language with an LLVM-based
-compiler can (with the right API bindings) run in Minecraft. Currently
+compiler can (with the right API bindings) run in Minecraft. Currently,
 bindings to both C and Rust exist. While not as visually impressive as
 a redstone computer, Langcraft does stretch the bounds of the game quite
 a bit, using jukeboxes for memory, armor stands to represent pointers,
@@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@ Some of the game's features:
   effects & particle systems;
 - Modding support.
 
-The game was build on top of a home grown game engine using:
+The game was built on top of a homegrown game engine using:
 winit, glium, imgui-rs, [tinyecs], [awesomium-rs], imgui-rs, [ears].
 
 [![A screenshot from the recording](shar-talk.jpeg)][shar-talk]