From 648f486c3417f67d468d0039a1dd04e4a7d98411 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Richard Gibson <richard.gibson@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 16 Jun 2023 20:36:49 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Editorial: Improve the [[LocaleData]] explanation
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* Use a locale for which the default calendar does not sort first alphabetically.
* Use a locale that is more than just a language identifier.
* Replace vague "would therefore at least include…" language with a complete Record example.
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 spec/negotiation.html | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/spec/negotiation.html b/spec/negotiation.html
index 5293bf79..be513d55 100644
--- a/spec/negotiation.html
+++ b/spec/negotiation.html
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ <h1>Internal slots of Service Constructors</h1>
     </ul>
 
     <emu-note>
-      For example, an implementation of DateTimeFormat might include the language tag *"th"* in its [[AvailableLocales]] internal slot, and must (according to <emu-xref href="#sec-intl.datetimeformat-internal-slots"></emu-xref>) include the key *"ca"* in its [[RelevantExtensionKeys]] internal slot.
-      For Thai, the *"buddhist"* calendar is usually the default, but an implementation might also support the calendars *"gregory"*, *"chinese"*, and *"islamicc"* for the locale *"th"*.
-      The [[LocaleData]] internal slot would therefore at least include {[[th]]: {[[ca]]: &laquo; *"buddhist"*, *"gregory"*, *"chinese"*, *"islamicc"* &raquo;}}.
+      For example, an implementation of DateTimeFormat might include the language tag *"fa-IR"* in its [[AvailableLocales]] internal slot, and must (according to <emu-xref href="#sec-intl.datetimeformat-internal-slots"></emu-xref>) include the keys *"ca"*, *"hc"*, and *"nu"* in its [[RelevantExtensionKeys]] internal slot.
+      The default calendar for that locale is usually *"persian"*, but an implementation might also support *"gregory"*, *"islamic"*, and *"islamic-civil"*.
+	  The Record in the DateTimeFormat [[LocaleData]] internal slot would therefore include a [[fa-IR]] field whose value is a Record like { [[ca]]: « *"persian"*, *"gregory"*, *"islamic"*, *"islamic-civil"* », [[hc]]: « … », [[nu]]: « … » }, along with other locale-named fields having the same value shape but different elements in their Lists.
     </emu-note>
   </emu-clause>