From e37d2659dfb792154b0f937e48cb6d9c92f98844 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Tue, 22 Aug 2023 12:30:04 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 1/8] Note under visual presentation --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 628350bb97..8c0b3c16a4 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -13,5 +13,6 @@

Visual Presentation

  • Line spacing (leading) is at least space-and-a-half within paragraphs, and paragraph spacing is at least 1.5 times larger than the line spacing.
  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • +

    The 'mechanism' is usually the browser or assitive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some of these mechanisms.

    From 575639cf770660970ca53c30210d5788014e5cb1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Tue, 22 Aug 2023 18:59:38 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 2/8] Update guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html Thanks, I need to work out way the spell-checker in my IDE isn't working! Co-authored-by: Matt Garrish --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 8c0b3c16a4..fe553cd196 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -13,6 +13,6 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Line spacing (leading) is at least space-and-a-half within paragraphs, and paragraph spacing is at least 1.5 times larger than the line spacing.
  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' is usually the browser or assitive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some of these mechanisms.

    +

    The 'mechanism' is usually the browser or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some of these mechanisms.

    From ca0a9f479ba3fd384d54a7a80dc4f52c7ffb03d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Tue, 22 Aug 2023 19:06:13 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 3/8] browser to user-agent --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index fe553cd196..1ec5a70643 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -13,6 +13,7 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Line spacing (leading) is at least space-and-a-half within paragraphs, and paragraph spacing is at least 1.5 times larger than the line spacing.
  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' is usually the browser or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some of these mechanisms.

    + +

    The 'mechanism' is usually the user-agent or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some of these mechanisms.

    From da5337af91dd00b412feeefa191ecc7cc3888052 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2023 16:59:49 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 4/8] Refining terms --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 1ec5a70643..6f058a6141 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -14,6 +14,6 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' is usually the user-agent or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some of these mechanisms.

    +

    The 'mechanism' for acheiving the presentation can be the user-agent or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    From 2e2e9860a8e8803b520183eecf23e42b3ccb99e3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2023 17:21:42 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 5/8] Typo --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 6f058a6141..8764a57617 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -14,6 +14,6 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' for acheiving the presentation can be the user-agent or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    +

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be the user-agent or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    From 708b9c783a1fe81c30af5c91dd102c055ffcce4a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2023 17:24:40 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 6/8] Matt's suggestion --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 8764a57617..54beb23447 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -14,6 +14,6 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be the user-agent or assistive technology manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    +

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be provided by the user-agent manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    From 475e2d93a8e73c95b7d1d498e5eb217b46236905 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2023 17:26:26 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 7/8] Update guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 54beb23447..4a4c1304a1 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -14,6 +14,6 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be provided by the user-agent manipulating the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    +

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be provided by the user-agent, which can manipulate the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    From 3e3d0845b1adef0f3d992dd79757c1b228202d90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Tue, 5 Sep 2023 13:56:30 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 8/8] Matt's suggestion Co-authored-by: Dan Bjorge --- guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html index 4a4c1304a1..fa52385492 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html @@ -14,6 +14,6 @@

    Visual Presentation

  • Text can be resized without assistive technology up to 200 percent in a way that does not require the user to scroll horizontally to read a line of text on a full-screen window.
    • -

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be provided by the user-agent, which can manipulate the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing in which case users might not use some or any of these requirements.

    +

    The 'mechanism' for achieving the presentation can be provided by the user-agent, which can manipulate the content on behalf of the user. It is not a requirement for the author to provide the mechanism. Some writing systems have additional or different requirements, or do not customarily use features such as paragraph spacing. When a specific feature is inapplicable to a writing system, this criterion does not require a mechanism to achieve that feature for content authored in that writing system.