From 669c374c43d745b57b1c2a11afe0147d95ae48e8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shawn Lawton Henry Date: Fri, 29 Sep 2023 09:45:54 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] notes in text-spacing.html First paragraph: more direct language focused on the common misunderstanding. The rest trying to be succinct covering minimum needed in /TR and rest in Understanding. rationale: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BoPr_AXLoSTAvcm6OOGVm-2FmbIKC7rKTifhnxucQ6Q/edit --- guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html | 6 ++---- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html index cb93649f24..4ab5152b58 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html @@ -15,10 +15,8 @@

Text Spacing

Exception: Human languages and scripts that do not make use of one or more of these text style properties in written text can conform using only the properties that exist for that combination of language and script.

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It is not required that content use the values specified. The requirement is to ensure no loss of content or functionality when a user overrides the authored styles with the values.

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Content is not required to use these text spacing values. The requirement is to ensure that when a user overrides the authored text spacing, content or functionality is not lost.

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Some human languages or writing systems have different needs and may adjust other values (such as paragraph start indent) in order to improve legibility. This success criterion might not be sufficient for those needs.

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It is beneficial for users if authors use any locally available guidance for improving readability in the local language or writing system. If the user chooses to go beyond the metrics specified, any resulting loss of content or functionality is the user's responsibility.

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Some language writing systems do not use all of the text spacing settings in this success criterion. Some use different types of spacing to improve readability and legibility, such as paragraph start indent.

From 0b6a3641aa0040db8f02c2d066136298dd9e5df9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shawn Lawton Henry Date: Fri, 29 Sep 2023 12:37:13 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] addressing Addison's input on text-spacing while keeping it succinct --- guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html index 4ab5152b58..ad9353991f 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html @@ -17,6 +17,6 @@

Text Spacing

Content is not required to use these text spacing values. The requirement is to ensure that when a user overrides the authored text spacing, content or functionality is not lost.

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Some language writing systems do not use all of the text spacing settings in this success criterion. Some use different types of spacing to improve readability and legibility, such as paragraph start indent.

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Writing systems for some languages use different text spacing settings, such as paragraph start indent. Authors are encouraged to follow guidance for improving readability and legibility of text in their writing system.

From 90210a7805a27084c05bcf6930a21abf1fa150c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kevin White Date: Fri, 29 Sep 2023 20:21:58 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Removing strong I don't feel there is a need for this phrase to be particularly called out since in isolaiton it doesn't quite communicate anything meaningful --- guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html index ad9353991f..be87c0e6b5 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@

Text Spacing

Exception: Human languages and scripts that do not make use of one or more of these text style properties in written text can conform using only the properties that exist for that combination of language and script.

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Content is not required to use these text spacing values. The requirement is to ensure that when a user overrides the authored text spacing, content or functionality is not lost.

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Content is not required to use these text spacing values. The requirement is to ensure that when a user overrides the authored text spacing, content or functionality is not lost.

Writing systems for some languages use different text spacing settings, such as paragraph start indent. Authors are encouraged to follow guidance for improving readability and legibility of text in their writing system.

From b2ae658ed0e6d5d22e3b5737a4867f3efdd87b01 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alastair Campbell Date: Tue, 3 Oct 2023 09:52:28 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Update guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html --- guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html index be87c0e6b5..e4beeae479 100644 --- a/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html +++ b/guidelines/sc/21/text-spacing.html @@ -17,6 +17,6 @@

Text Spacing

Content is not required to use these text spacing values. The requirement is to ensure that when a user overrides the authored text spacing, content or functionality is not lost.

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Writing systems for some languages use different text spacing settings, such as paragraph start indent. Authors are encouraged to follow guidance for improving readability and legibility of text in their writing system.

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Writing systems for some languages use different text spacing settings, such as paragraph start indent. Authors are encouraged to follow locally available guidance for improving readability and legibility of text in their writing system.