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<teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>Xray</title>
<author>Baroness Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven</author>
<respStmt>
<resp>Text Encoding by </resp>
<name>Tanya Clement</name>
</respStmt>
<respStmt>
<resp>Proofing and Additional Encoding by </resp>
<name>Tanya Clement</name>
</respStmt>
<respStmt>
<resp>TIFF images scanned at 600 dpi from manuscript pages and JPEGS derived
by</resp>
<name>Tanya Clement</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<publisher>Tanya Clement</publisher>
<address>
<addrLine>Office of Digital Collections and Research (DCR), University of Maryland, College Park, MD 20742</addrLine>
</address>
<availability status="unknown">
<p>Baroness Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven's poetry is printed here with the
support of the University of Maryland Libraries. Permission to reproduce
images of Freytag-Loringhoven's manuscripts has also been generously granted
by the libraries.</p>
<p>This poem and manuscript drafts are available from this site for
demonstration purposes only. Though the intellectual property of <name>Elsa
von Freytag-Loringhoven</name> is in the public domain, all annotations
and editorial commentary are copyrighted. They may not be reproduced without
explicit permission from the copyright holder. For copyright information,
please contact Tanya Clement.</p>
</availability>
</publicationStmt>
<notesStmt>
<note type="image" anchored="true">
<p>The images are JPEGS derived from TIFFS scanned at 600 dpi.</p></note>
<note type="image" anchored="true">
<witDetail wit="#pub1927" target="#pub1927" place="apparatus">First: this
version appeared in <title rend="italic" level="j">transition</title> 7
(October 1927): 135. There is no image for this version. </witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va9" target="#va9" place="apparatus">Second: Reel 5, Frame 514 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003138-0001.jpg"/>
</figure>
</witDetail>
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<graphic url="images/litmss-003149-0001.jpg"/>
</figure>
</witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va7" target="#va7" place="apparatus">Fourth: Reel 5, Frame 188 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003281-0001.jpg"/>
</figure>
</witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va6" target="#va6" place="apparatus">Fifth: Reel 5, Frame 23 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003147-0001.jpg"/>
</figure>
</witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va5" target="#va5" place="apparatus">Sixth: Reel 5, Frame 1132 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003151-0001.jpg"/>
</figure></witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va4" target="#va4" place="apparatus">Seventh: Reel 5, Frame
1136 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003155-0001.jpg"/>
</figure></witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va3" target="#va3" place="apparatus">Eighth: Reel 5, Frame 1131 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003150-0001.jpg"/>
</figure></witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va2" target="#va2" place="apparatus">Ninth: Reel 5, Frame 1134 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003153-0001.jpg"/>
</figure>
</witDetail>
<witDetail wit="#va1" target="#va1" place="apparatus">Tenth: Reel 5, Frame 1133 <figure>
<graphic url="images/litmss-003152-0001.jpg"/>
</figure>
</witDetail>
</note>
<note anchored="true">Drafts of this poem occupy series 3, box 4, folder 44.</note>
<note type="critIntro">
<p>The poem "Xray" was published in <title rend="italic" level="j"
>transition</title> (October 1927: 134-135). There are ten extant
versions (including the published text). Across the versions there are some
phrases that remain more or less the same, some that change course and
change back, and still others that evolve quite dramatically in a
perceptive, linear fashion. </p>
</note>
</notesStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<p>Encoded documents and images are derived from manuscripts in the <ref
target="http://www.lib.umd.edu/litmss/holdings.html#evfl">Papers of Elsa von
Freytag-Loringhoven</ref> in Special Collections at the University of
Maryland, College Park, Libraries. In addition, individual pages or leaves of
manuscripts are identified by the corresponding reel and frame numbers of the
microfilm edition of the Freytag-Lorinhoven Papers.</p>
<p>The one printed version of Xray appeared in <title rend="italic" level="j"
>transition</title> 7 (October 1927): 135. </p>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<encodingDesc>
<editorialDecl>
<p>DTD constructed from TEI P5 poetry base with tagsets for linking, figures,
analysis, transcr, textcrit.</p>
<p>Line numbers have been included to reflect the numbering across all versions.
Thus, some line numbers are missing on versions which do not include all lines
within the text.</p>
</editorialDecl>
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</encodingDesc>
</teiHeader>
<text>
<front>
<div>
<listWit xml:id="all">
<witness xml:id="pub1927">First</witness>
<witness xml:id="va9">Second </witness>
<witness xml:id="va8">Third </witness>
<witness xml:id="va7">Fourth </witness>
<witness xml:id="va6">Fifth </witness>
<witness xml:id="va5">Sixth </witness>
<witness xml:id="va4">Seventh </witness>
<witness xml:id="va3">Eighth </witness>
<witness xml:id="va2">Ninth </witness>
<witness xml:id="va1">Tenth </witness>
</listWit>
</div>
</front>
<body>
<div1>
<lg>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">VIVID FALLS</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">BUGLE SKY</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">CASTLE CLOUDS</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">LEAFY LIMBSWISH</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">WESTWARD</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">SAXOPHONE DAYS STEELBLAST GALAXY</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">EASTWARD</del>
<note type="critical">This fragment is a manuscript version of
Freytag-Loringhoven's compilation poem "Ostentatious: Westward:
Eastward: Agog."</note>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
</lg>
</div1>
<div1 n="1">
<head type="main" rend="underline">
<app loc="a1">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va9">X</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4"> -</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va9"> RAY</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">S.</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2">.</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7">
<del rend="overstrike">
<unclear>??</unclear>
</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<del rend="overstrike">
<unclear>??</unclear>
</del>
<add place="above">X-RAY. </add>
</rdg>
</app>
</head>
<head type="main">
<app loc="a1">
<rdg wit="#va5 #pub1927">X </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">- </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5 #pub1927">RAY</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">
<del>RADIO </del>
</rdg>
</app>
</head>
<lg n="1">
<l n="1">
<app loc="a3">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9 #va6">NATURE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5">INTENDS</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6 #va7">
<del>INTENDS </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7">
<del rend="overstrike">
<unclear>??</unclear>
</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7 #va6">
<add place="above">CAUSES </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8 #va9">CAUSES </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9 #va6"> BRASS TO </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">CORODE</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9 #va6"> OXIDIZE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va7 #va8 #va6">- </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">Nature causes brass to oxidize </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">PEOPLE POLISH </del>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a3a">
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">WITH INDEFATIGABLE RUB AGAINST PRIMITIVE
COROSION</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="2">
<app loc="a4">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va6">NATURE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5">INTENDS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<space resp="editor" quantity="15" unit="char"/>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">
<del>INTENDS </del>
<add place="above">CAUSES </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7">CAUSES </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<del rend="overstrike">NATURE CAUSES </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9 #va6">
<choice>
<sic>POEPLE</sic>
<corr>PEOPLE</corr>
</choice> TO </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va6">AMASS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7"> - - -</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<del rend="overstrike">AMASS </del>
<add place="above">CONGEST </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">CONGEST</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va8 #va6"> - </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">People to congest - </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a9d">
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">
<choice>
<sic>POEPLE</sic>
<corr>PEOPLE</corr>
</choice> KILL </del>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a10">
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike"> WITH INDEFATIGABLE</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a6">
<rdg wit="#va8">
<app>
<rdgGrp>
<rdg wit="#va8">SUNS RADIOINFUSED</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">RADIO'S <add place="below">
<app>
<rdgGrp>
<rdg wit="#va8"> SOIL SECRET </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8"> SUN MESSAGE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<del rend="overstrike">PENETR</del> SUNIMPREGNATED
</rdg>
</rdgGrp>
</app></add></rdg>
</rdgGrp>
</app> SOIL </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="3">
<app loc="a6">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va6">BECAUSE OF </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">RADIO </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7"><del rend="overstrike">BECAUSE OF </del> RADIO - </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">LATENT</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2">
<del rend="overstrike">LATENT</del>
<add place="above">DORMANT </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va3 #va4 #va5">DORMANT </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5"> IDEAL OF </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va3 #va4">BRILLIANCY -</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">BRILLIANCY</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7 #va8 #va6">DORMANT WITHIN SOIL FOR PROGRESS' </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">DUMB </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">BY DULL </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8 #va9">RADIOPENETRATED SOIL </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">By dull-radiopenetrated soil </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a7">
<rdg wit="#va2">BRILLIANCY </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9">LUXURY </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">
<del>LUXURY <unclear>??</unclear> ARISTOCRACY </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">- </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9"> ORNAMENT </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va6"> - </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va3">ARISTOCRACY </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va3"> - </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">ASPIRATION -</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7">
<del rend="overstrike">
<unclear>?? </unclear>
</del>
<add place="below">
<emph rend="underline">SUNSHINE</emph>
</add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<add place="above">
<del rend="overstrike">SUNSHINE </del>
</add>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">
<choice>
<sic>POEPLE</sic>
<corr>PEOPLE</corr>
</choice> POLISH</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a7">
<rdg wit="#va2 #va5">ARISTOCRACY</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6"><add place="margin">SUN </add> SHINE -</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a8a">
<rdg wit="#va2"> ASPIRATION - - - - -</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7">CAUSES </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">PENETRATES FORCES STIMULATES CAUSES</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">
<del rend="overstrike">FORCES </del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a7">
<rdg wit="#va5">SHINE</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a9b">
<rdg wit="#va7">COSMIC HAND'S</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a9b">
<rdg wit="#va7">DYNAMIC CROWD</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="4">
<app loc="a3a">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va6">WITH INDEFATIGEABLE
RUB</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4 #va5 #va7 #va6">B</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va6"> AGAINST </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va6">PRIMITIVE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">PRIMITIVE</del>
<add place="above">PRIMITIVE </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va6">COROSION </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va3 #va6"> - </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a19b">
<rdg wit="#va9">DESTINNED </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">Destined</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a9d">
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">
<choice>
<sic>POEPLE</sic>
<corr>PEOPLE</corr>
</choice> KILL</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a10">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va5 #va7 #va6">WITH INDEFATIGEABLE RUB</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5 #va7 #va6">B </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<space resp="editor" quantity="25" unit="char"/>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va6"> AGAINST </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">PRIMITIVE CROWDING -</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4 #va5 #va7 #va6">INDISTINCT </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">ION CROWDING</del>
<add place="above">QUANTITY </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5 #va7 #va6">QUANTITY </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6"> - </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="5">
<app loc="a10a">
<rdg wit="#va5">FATE FLURY ONTO SPIRIT PRESS </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<del rend="overstrike">CAUSES</del>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">
<choice>
<sic>POEPLE </sic>
<corr>PEOPLE </corr>
</choice>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<subst>
<del>PEOPLE POLISH</del>
<add place="above">
<del rend="overstrike">THINE </del>
</add>
</subst>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a9b">
<rdg wit="#va4">
<add>COSMIC HANDS </add>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9">POLISH </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2 #va3"> - </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a9b">
<rdg wit="#va5 #va8 #va9 #va6">COSMIC HANDS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">
<del>CROWDED </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8 #va9 #va6">DYNAMIC </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<del rend="overstrike">CROWD </del>
<add place="above">GANG </add>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va7 #va8 #va9">TO </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a9b">
<rdg wit="#va9">GANG </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">CROWD </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="5">
<app loc="a9b">
<rdg wit="#pub1927">Cosmic hand's dynamic gang </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="6">
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va5 #va7 #va8 #va6">POLISH</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7 #va8"> - </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">Polish - </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="7">
<app loc="a7a">
<rdg wit="#va9"><del rend="overstrike">TO </del> POLISH </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a9d">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">
<choice>
<sic>POEPLE </sic>
<corr>PEOPLE </corr>
</choice>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<space resp="editor" quantity="7" unit="char"/>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">
<space resp="editor" quantity="3" unit="char"/>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9">KILL </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2 #va7 #va8"> - </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va3"> . </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5"><space resp="editor" quantity="7" unit="char"/>
FASTIDIOUS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927 #va6">Kill -</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va3">
<del rend="overstrike">
<unclear>??</unclear>
</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va4 #va5">POLISHING BRASS KNO</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">CKERS -<note type="critical" anchored="true"
resp="editor">This added span, from "Polishing brass knockers .
. . to civilizations progress" appears on the manuscript before
the frist line "Nature intends . . ."</note></rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2">
<del rend="overstrike">CKERS</del>
<add place="above">BS </add>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2">KILLING <choice>
<sic>POEPLE</sic>
<corr>PEOPLE</corr>
</choice> -</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2">CONTINUES</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="9">
<app loc="a17">
<rdg wit="#va1">FOR CIVILISATIONS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">ADVANCE</del>
<add place="above">PROGRESS </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2">PROGRESS -</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a19b">
<rdg wit="#va8">BY DESTINY </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a18a">
<rdg wit="#va7 #va9 #va6">FOR FASTIDIOUS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">
<del>TASTE PALATE <add>LORD </add></del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">For fastidioius </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7 #va6">BOSS'</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="10">
<app loc="a18">
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2">NATURE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">AG</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va4 #va5 #va7 #va8 #va9"> CONTRA NATURE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va2">'S FINISHING </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">
<add place="above">FINISHING </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1 #va2">PROCESS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va1">
<del rend="overstrike">Progress</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va4">
<del rend="overstrike">FOR SHINE LORD CONTRA CHAOS</del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">LORD CONTRA CHAOS <add place="below">FOR
QUALITY</add></del>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a18a">
<rdg wit="#va8">FOR FASTIDIOUS </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">BRILLIANT </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8 #va9">BOSS' </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9">
<add place="above">IDEE FIX </add>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a18b">
<rdg wit="#va7 #va8 #va9">SUM TOTAL</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va7">
<del rend="overstrike"> : </del>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a18a">
<rdg wit="#va6">
<del rend="overstrike">DIVINE IDÉE FIX </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">Brilliant boss' "idee fixe " </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a10a">
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">ON SPIRIT PRESS</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a10a">
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">IN LABORATORY </del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app loc="a10a">
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">ON SPIRIT PRESS</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">OH LORD</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="11">
<app loc="a18a">
<rdg wit="#va2"><del rend="overstrike">FOR </del> BY <del
rend="overstrike">| | </del>
<add place="above">FOR - </add><del rend="overstrike">| | | BY LORDS
FIXED IDEA</del>
<add place="below"><del rend="overstrike">DIOS </del> DIVINE<del
rend="overstrike">ITY'S </del> "IDÉE FIX."
</add></rdg>
<rdg wit="#va3 #va4 #va5">FOR </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va5">
<del rend="overstrike">FASTIDIOUS </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va3 #va4">DIVINE </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va3 #va4 #va5"> "IDÉE FIX."</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a19b">
<rdg wit="#va7">OUR DESTINY: </rdg>
<rdg wit="#va8">
<add place="below">RADIANCE </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va6">
<del rend="overstrike">SPIRIT </del>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9 #va6">RADIANCE </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a18b">
<rdg wit="#va6">
<add>SUM TOTAL </add>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#pub1927">Sum total : </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l n="12">
<app loc="a18">
<rdg wit="#va4">LORD CONTRA CHAOS.</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a19b">
<rdg wit="#va7">
<emph rend="underline">RADIANCE</emph>
</rdg>
<rdg wit="#va9a #av9">OUR DESTINY </rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a18a">
<rdg wit="#va9">
<del rend="overstrike">DIVINE IDÉE FIX </del>
</rdg>
</app>
<app loc="a19b">
<rdg wit="#pub1927"><space resp="editor" quantity="7" unit="char"/>
Radiance</rdg>
</app>
</l>
</lg>
<closer>
<signed>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2 #va3 #va9a">
<persName key="Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven"> E.V.F.L</persName>
</rdg>
</app>
</signed>
</closer>
</div1>
<div1>
<div2>
<lg>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">ALL <del rend="overstrike">GOD</del> LORD <del
rend="overstrike">IS</del> DYNAMIC DESIGNER - FAITHFULL <del
rend="overstrike">TO MAP OF HIS MIND</del> MINDMAP ONLY
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">
<del rend="overstrike">CONSCIENCE IS SONS THRALL TO VIOLENCE
</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">
<del rend="overstrike">FORCE PRIMITIVE UNJUSTLY</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">
<del rend="overstrike">OMNIPOTENCY GRAVELS CONSCIENCE IS <add
place="above">TRACES </add>RESULT</del>
</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">ALL <del rend="overstrike">IS</del> ENTHRALLED <del
rend="overstrike">INTO</del>
<add place="below">TO <del rend="overstrike">BY </del></add>
<add place="above">
<del rend="overstrike">DYNAMIC</del>
</add> OMNIPOTENCY GRAVELS </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2"><add place="above">ELECTRIC </add> ROUTINE.</rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">CONSCIENCE <del rend="overstrike">IS </del>
<add place="above">LIES </add>BEYOND RECKONING IN </rdg>
</app>
</l>
<l>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2"><add place="inline">COSMIC BRAINS </add> SUM TOTAL
<del rend="overstrike">OF </del></rdg>
</app>
</l>
</lg>
</div2>
<div2>
<head>
<app>
<rdg wit="#va2">IDEAL OF PERFECTION<note type="critical">The following
excerpt is a manuscript version of Freytag-Loringhoven's poem
"Christ - Don Quixote - St. George." This poem is part of a
larger compilation of poems called "Contradictory Speculations
on My Own Hook's Fallibility". </note>
</rdg>
</app>
</head>
<p>
<app>
<rdg wit="va#2">HOW CAME CONCEPTION OF CHIVALRY <del rend="overstrike"
>INTO CHRIST FIRST DON QUIXOTE IN FIGHTING</del>
<add place="above">DEFYING </add>
<del rend="overstrike">ATTACKING</del> ELEMENTALLY DRIVEN <del
rend="overstrike">DRIVEN FORCED BRUTAL ROTATING</del> WINDMILL
ROTATION OF LORD<del rend="overstrike">S</del> BEASTS ACTIVE FORCED
- INTO CHIRST DON QUIXOTE I. BY SPIRITUAL DESIRE OF <add
place="above">ELEMENT SHACKLED </add><del rend="overstrike">
LORD</del> BEASTS UNATAINABLE <add place="margin">IN </add>
MATERIAL DIMENSION SPIRIT LORD <del rend="overstrike">IS IN</del>
CHRIST - ALL <del rend="overstrike">HIS</del> DISCIPLES <add
place="above">ARE ARE </add> COMPROMISED <add place="margin"
>USED FOR DIGESTION </add> ON EARTH <del rend="overstrike"
><unclear>??</unclear> DEVOURED</del> BY <del
rend="overstrike">BEASTS LORD BEAST </del> LORD BEASTS
DEPENDANCE ON <del rend="overstrike">ENTRAILS VITALS MATTER
STOMACH</del> ELEMENTAL VITALS <add place="below">TO BE DEVOURED
</add> HE MUST EAT. HERE IS <del rend="overstrike">LORD</del>
<add place="above">GOD </add> BODY LORD - CRUCIFYING <add
place="below">
<del rend="overstrike">DESTROYING</del>
</add>
<add place="above">HAZING PITYING </add> DON QUIXOTE BUT REMOVAL
OF<del rend="overstrike"> ENTRAILS</del>
<add place="above">DIGESTING </add> VITALS IS FOR <add place="above">
<unclear>??</unclear>
</add>
<del rend="overstrike">LORDS PERFECTION</del> BENEFIT DON QUIXOTES
RISE TO FIRM ESTATE POOR PESTERED LORD - ELEMENT THRALL <del
rend="overstrike"> LORD OF</del>
<add place="below">BY </add>
<add place="above">THY </add>
<del rend="overstrike">HAS</del> NEED <add place="above">THINE HIS
</add> COMPROMISED <add place="above">BARBARIL </add> TO <del
rend="overstrike">HIS CREATIONS</del>
<add place="above"><unclear>??</unclear> MEDIUMS </add> NECESSITY
<del rend="overstrike">BUT</del> THY MESSAGE IS HEARD - <del
rend="overstrike">THY</del> SIGN <add place="above">
<del rend="overstrike">IS</del>
</add> BEHELD THEY OMNIPOTENCY PLENISHED BY BEASTS APPETITE BECOMES
VOLUMINOUS MORE CONFIDENTLY THY DON QUIXOTERY GROW<del
rend="overstrike">ING</del><add place="above">S </add>
ASCENDANCY WITH <del rend="overstrike">THY ASSEMBLED</del>
<add place="above">SPIRITS </add> HEROES ASSEMBLAGE - IS RECOGNIZE
WE HELP THEE FIGHTING BEASTLY WITH BEAST PURPOSE <add place="margin">
<del rend="overstrike">IN</del>
</add> CONSCIOUS - <add place="above">
<del rend="overstrike">GLORY NESS </del>
</add> FOR GLORY FOR THY REDEMPTION </rdg>
</app>
</p>
</div2>
</div1>
</body>
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