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Author: priscilawebdev

static/app/gettingStartedDocs/console/xbox.tsx

@@ -1,8 +1,6 @@
 import {openPrivateGamingSdkAccessModal} from 'sentry/actionCreators/modal';
 import {Button} from 'sentry/components/core/button';
 import {ExternalLink} from 'sentry/components/core/link';
-import List from 'sentry/components/list';
-import ListItem from 'sentry/components/list/listItem';
 import {
   type Docs,
   type OnboardingConfig,
@@ -19,7 +17,7 @@ const onboarding: OnboardingConfig = {
         {
           type: 'text',
           text: tct(
-            'Our [sentryXboxLink:Sentry Xbox SDK] extends the core [sentryNativeLink:sentry-native] library with Xbox specific implementations and is designed to work across standalone engines, Unreal Engine, and Unity.',
+            'Our [sentryXboxLink:Sentry Xbox SDK] extends the core [sentryNativeLink:sentry-native] library with Xbox-specific implementations for standalone engines and proprietary game engines.',
             {
               code: <code />,
               sentryXboxLink: (
@@ -36,9 +34,12 @@ const onboarding: OnboardingConfig = {
           alertType: 'warning',
           icon: <IconLock size="sm" locked />,
           text: tct(
-            '[strong:Access Restricted]. The Xbox SDK is distributed through a private repository under NDA.',
+            '[strong:Access Restricted]. The Xbox SDK is distributed through a [privateRepositoryLink:private repository] under NDA.',
             {
               strong: <strong />,
+              privateRepositoryLink: (
+                <ExternalLink href="https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-xbox" />
+              ),
             }
           ),
           showIcon: true,
@@ -62,7 +63,7 @@ const onboarding: OnboardingConfig = {
         {
           type: 'text',
           text: t(
-            'Once you have access, the private repository contains complete instructions for building and integrating the SDK with your engine of choice.'
+            'Once the access is granted, you can proceed with the SDK integration.'
           ),
         },
       ],
@@ -74,55 +75,13 @@ const onboarding: OnboardingConfig = {
       content: [
         {
           type: 'text',
-          text: t(
-            'The SDK supports multiple integration paths depending on your engine:'
-          ),
-        },
-        {
-          type: 'custom',
-          content: (
-            <List symbol="bullet">
-              <ListItem>
-                {tct(
-                  '[strong:Standalone] - engine agostic, pure sentry-native to be used, for example, on proprietary game engines',
-                  {strong: <strong />}
-                )}
-              </ListItem>
-              <ListItem>
-                {tct(
-                  '[strong:Unreal Engine] - as the extension to [sentryUnrealLink:sentry-unreal] on Xbox',
-                  {
-                    strong: <strong />,
-                    sentryUnrealLink: (
-                      <ExternalLink href="https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-unreal" />
-                    ),
-                  }
-                )}
-              </ListItem>
-              <ListItem>
-                {tct(
-                  '[strong:Unity] - as the extension to [sentryUnityLink:sentry-unity] on Xbox',
-                  {
-                    strong: <strong />,
-                    sentryUnityLink: (
-                      <ExternalLink href="https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-unity" />
-                    ),
-                  }
-                )}
-              </ListItem>
-            </List>
-          ),
-        },
-        {
-          type: 'text',
-          text: t(
-            'Please follow the Xbox specific integration instructions for your engine in the private repository.'
-          ),
-        },
-        {
-          type: 'text',
-          text: t(
-            "Here's a minimal example of initializing the SDK in a standalone setup:"
+          text: tct(
+            'The [privateRepositoryLink:private repository] contains complete setup instructions. Here is a basic example of how to initialize the SDK:',
+            {
+              privateRepositoryLink: (
+                <ExternalLink href="https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-xbox" />
+              ),
+            }
           ),
         },
         {
@@ -173,14 +132,8 @@ sentry_capture_event(sentry_value_new_message_event(
         },
         {
           type: 'text',
-          text: tct(
-            "Alternatively, if you're using [code:Unreal] or [code:Unity], refer to the engine-specific Xbox instructions in the [privateRepositoryLink:private repository] for details on how to trigger and verify events",
-            {
-              code: <code />,
-              privateRepositoryLink: (
-                <ExternalLink href="https://github.com/getsentry/sentry-xbox" />
-              ),
-            }
+          text: t(
+            'After sending this test event, you should see it appear in your Sentry dashboard, confirming that the Xbox integration is working correctly.'
           ),
         },
       ],