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Incomplete or awkward sentence in the Industrial IoT section #427

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shreyasgrampurohit opened this issue Sep 1, 2024 · 1 comment · Fixed by #429
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Incomplete or awkward sentence in the Industrial IoT section #427

shreyasgrampurohit opened this issue Sep 1, 2024 · 1 comment · Fixed by #429

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@shreyasgrampurohit
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Section 2.3.4:
"The Industrial Internet of Things (IoT) leverages Edge ML to monitor and control complex industrial processes. Here, machine learning models can analyze data from numerous sensors in real-time, enabling predictive maintenance, optimizing operations, and enhancing safety measures. This revolution in industrial automation and efficiency."

The last sentence feels incomplete or awkward. It seems to be missing a verb or more context to tie it together with the preceding sentences.

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Thanks @shreyasgrampurohit -- will fix it ASAP!

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