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Points to review in "sustainable_ai.qmd" #438

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BravoBaldo opened this issue Sep 7, 2024 · 1 comment · Fixed by #439
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Points to review in "sustainable_ai.qmd" #438

BravoBaldo opened this issue Sep 7, 2024 · 1 comment · Fixed by #439

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@BravoBaldo
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(Please Note: as always, some parts are personal opinions!)

  • Search "important in AI AI's rapid"... maybe a point missed or doubled "AI"
  • Search "reduce A. I'm" ???? ---> "reduce AI"
  • Search "does not meet requirements," ??? replace comma with dot
  • Search "does not directly emit carbon emissions but" --- "does not directly produce carbon emissions but"
  • The caption of "Energy sources and generation capabilities. Source: Energy Charts.." ends with 2 points! (see ..."?l=en&c=DE).](images"...
  • Search "a state-of-the-art fab producing state-of-the-art chips"--> obviously a "state-of-the-art" factory produces "state-of-the-art" things!
  • "BOD" is never declared, I suppose "Biochemical Oxygen Demand"
  • The sentence ending with "but these are ad hoc approaches at best."... perhaps should be revised
  • The subsections of "16.11 Embedded AI - Internet of Trash" are not numbered perhaps because they are declared with 4 "#" (e.g. "#### E-waste"). Is this intentional?
  • Search "As institutional investors" maybe the whole sentence should have been highlighted somehow but the tags "fail"
  • Search "This consists of three components", maybe the next sentence needs to be revised

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Keep them coming! Thanks @BravoBaldo.

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