Merge pull request #15 from mongodb-developer/main

Merge in recent changes from main branch

Author: LuceCarter

javascript/00_open_mongodb.ipynb

@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
    "source": [
     "# Open MongoDB Using the MongoDB Extension\n",
     "\n",
-    "- click on the MongoDB extension on the side panel\n",
-    "- to connect to the local database, click on ‘Library DB’ in the list of connections on the left side.\n",
+    "- Click on the MongoDB extension on the side panel\n",
+    "- To connect to the local database, click on ‘Library DB’ in the list of connections on the left side.\n",
     "\n",
     "We're using this connection string:\n",
     "\n",
@@ -34,10 +34,10 @@
    "source": [
     "## Open the library database\n",
     "\n",
-    "- open the library database\n",
-    "- open the books collection\n",
-    "- click on Documents\n",
-    "- open a document"
+    "- Open the library database\n",
+    "- Open the books collection\n",
+    "- Click on Documents\n",
+    "- Open a document"
    ]
   }
  ],

javascript/01_connect_database.ipynb

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "## Select the Javascript Kernel\n",
+    "## Select the JavaScript Kernel\n",
     "\n",
-    "To run the code cells in these notebooks you need to select the appropriate kernel (programming language). In this case is Javascript. Click on the `Select Kernel` button at the top right, then `Jupyter Kernel` > `Deno`"
+    "To run the code cells in these notebooks, you need to select the appropriate kernel (programming language). In this case, we'll use a JavaScript kernel. Click on the `Select Kernel` button at the top right, then `Jupyter Kernel` > `Deno`"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
    "source": [
     "## Set your connection String below\n",
     "\n",
-    "We can just connect to `localhost` as this devcontainer is also running a MongoDB instance with some data, or you can connect to your own Atlas cluster just changing the `connectionString` below."
+    "We can connect to the database hosted on `localhost` as this devcontainer is running a MongoDB instance with some data. Alternatively, you can connect to your own Atlas cluster by changing the `connectionString` below."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
    "source": [
     "## Send a Hello command\n",
     "\n",
-    "The `hello()` command returns database server details for the backend MongoDB database used in this workshop."
+    "The `hello()` command returns database server details for the MongoDB database."
    ]
   },
   {

javascript/11_find_arrays.ipynb

@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
    "source": [
     "## Don't make this mistake!\n",
     "\n",
-    "This will try to find books that have two genres and their names are exactly these and in that order! It is comparing the whole array! Usually we want to search inside the array."
+    "The query below will try to find books that have exactly two genres (Poetry and Fiction) in the designated order. The query looks for an exact match of the array. Usually we want to search inside the array."
    ]
   },
   {

javascript/40_delete.ipynb

@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
    "id": "9f6caab3",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "### We find the document we just inserted using the `_id` field"
+    "### Find the book using the `_id` field"
    ]
   },
   {