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-<p style="font-size: 16px;">I am Juil Koo, a second-year PhD student in the <a href="https://visualai.kaist.ac.kr/" target="_blank">KAIST Visual AI Group</a>, led by Prof. <a href="https://mhsung.github.io/" target="_blank">Minhyuk Sung</a>. I will fortunately be joining the <a href="https://research.adobe.com/" target="_blank">Adobe Research internship</a>, under the mentorship of <a href="https://www.duygu-ceylan.com/" target="_blank">Duygu Ceylan</a> in the coming summer of 2024.
+<p style="font-size: 16px;">I am Juil Koo, a second-year PhD student in the <a href="https://visualai.kaist.ac.kr/" target="_blank">KAIST Visual AI Group</a>, led by Prof. <a href="https://mhsung.github.io/" target="_blank">Minhyuk Sung</a>. This summer 2024, I will fortunately be joining <a href="https://research.adobe.com/" target="_blank">Adobe Research</a> as an intern, mentored by <a href="https://www.duygu-ceylan.com/" target="_blank">Duygu Ceylan</a>.
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 <p style="font-size: 16px;">My research interest lies in vision and language multi-modality, especially the relationship between <b>3D geometry and language</b>.
 	I am working towards the next advancement in AI, where machines are capable of more complex thought processes by leveraging multiple modalities, similar to humans.</p>
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-		<li> (Mar. 2024) I will start the internship at <a href="https://research.adobe.com/" target="_blank">Adobe Research</a> in London, under the mentorship of <a href="https://www.duygu-ceylan.com" target="_blank">Duygu Ceylan</a>, in the coming summer.</li>
+		<li> (Mar. 2024) I will start my internship at <a href="https://research.adobe.com/" target="_blank">Adobe Research</a> in London, under the mentorship of <a href="https://www.duygu-ceylan.com" target="_blank">Duygu Ceylan</a>, this coming summer.</li>
 	<li> (Feb. 2024) <a href="https://posterior-distillation-sampling.github.io/" target="_blank">Posterior Distillation Sampling</a> has been accepted at CVPR 2024!</li>
 		<li> (Sep. 2023) I presented a brief overview of <a href="https://salad3d.github.io/" target="_blank">SALAD</a> at
 			two workshops during ICCV 2023: <a href="https://languagefor3dscenes.github.io/ICCV2023/" target="_blank">Language