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@@ -74,29 +74,28 @@ <h6><a class="navbar-brand text-light" href="#body">Adil Aboulkacim</a></h6>
         <div class="col-lg-8 col-md-12">
           <h2 class="display-1 white-text">Hello there</h2>
           <p class="h4 white-text">I'm <strong>Adil Aboulkacim</strong>,
-            a student currently studying 5th and last year of MSc in computer science in <a
+            a student currently studying in my 5th and final year of an MSc in Computer Science at <a
               href="https://www.miun.se/en/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Mid Sweden University</a>.</p>
           <span class="divider-25"></span>
           <div class="col-md-12">
             <p class="white-text">I'm enthusiastic about tech, coding, and learning new things about computers and what they can do.
-              I've been dabbling with coding since roughly the age of 15 until I started studying computer science at the university at 19,
-              where my interest really peaked.
+              I've been dabbling with coding since I was about 15, but my interest really peaked when I started studying Computer Science at university at 19.
               Take a peek at the <a href="#projects">projects</a> I have done,
-              or jump straight to my <a href="https://github.com/Adilius" target="_blank" rel="noopener">github</a>.
-               When I have time I sometimes contributing to <a
+              or jump straight to my <a href="https://github.com/Adilius" target="_blank" rel="noopener">GitHub</a>.
+               When I have time, I contribute to <a
                 href="https://github.com/pulls?q=is%3Apr+author%3AAdilius" target="_blank" rel="noopener">open
                 source</a>
-              projects and
+              projects,
               answer questions in <a href="https://stackoverflow.com/users/7916220/adilius" target="_blank"
                 rel="noopener">forums</a> and
               help people with code.
             </p>
-            <p class="white-text">Other than coding I enjoy tinkering with computers and my homelab,
-              as of now includes an old PC running Raid 1 <a href="https://www.truenas.com/" target="_blank"
+            <p class="white-text">Besides coding, I enjoy tinkering with computers and my homelab,
+              which, as of now, includes an old PC running RAID 1 <a href="https://www.truenas.com/" target="_blank"
                 rel="noopener">TrueNAS</a>
               and a Raspberry Pi 3 running <a href="https://pi-hole.net/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Pi-hole</a> and
               <a href="https://www.pivpn.io/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">PiVPN</a>.
-              I also love to attended hackathons where people and code meet together to solve solutions in a hastly
+              I also love to attended hackathons where people and code come together to solve problems in a hasty
               manner.
             </p>
           </div>
@@ -181,7 +180,7 @@ <h2 class="display-1 text-center white-text">Projects</h2>
               <img class="card-img-top" src="img/projects/ODE.png" alt="Decision Tree Classifier">
               <div class="card-body">
                 <p class="card-text">
-                  A web API to receive a dataset in JSON or CSV format and evaluate it's suitability for machine
+                  A web API to receive a dataset in JSON or CSV format and evaluate its suitability for machine
                   learning use.
                 </p>
                 <div class="d-flex justify-content-between align-items-center">
@@ -208,7 +207,7 @@ <h2 class="display-1 text-center white-text">Projects</h2>
             <div class="card mb-3 box-shadow">
               <img class="card-img-top" src="img/projects/fourpersonalityquiz.png" alt="Decision Tree Classifier">
               <div class="card-body">
-                <p class="card-text">Four personality quiz - Flask website to determine your
+                <p class="card-text">Four personality quiz — Flask website to determine your
                   <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DISC_assessment" target="_blank" rel="noopener">DISC</a>
                   personality
                 </p>
@@ -233,7 +232,7 @@ <h2 class="display-1 text-center white-text">Projects</h2>
                 <source src="img/projects/AdiliusWSDG.mp4" type="video/mp4">
               </video>
               <div class="card-body">
-                <p class="card-text">AdiliusWSDG -
+                <p class="card-text">AdiliusWSDG —
                   A Python application to automatically grab
                   <a href="https://www.webhallen.com/info/27-Medlemsinfo" target="_blank" rel="noopener">supply
                     drops</a>