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_posts/2024-02-01-Networking-UX-improvements.md

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ We have gradually been making improvements to the Azure portal experience for ma
 
 ## Overview page
 
-On the overview page that you land on when opening an App Service app in the Azure portal, we have added some essential Networking info and provided "deep links". You can click the Networking header to go to the Networking hub and you can see you virtual network integration status and go directly to the configuration. You'll also see the IP configuration of your app.
+On the overview page that you land on when opening an App Service app in the Azure portal, we have added some essential networking info and provided "deep links". You can click the Networking header to go to the Networking hub and you can see your virtual network integration status and go directly to the configuration. You'll also see the IP configuration of your app.
 
 ![Azure portal app overview]({{site.baseurl}}/media/2024/02/app-overview.png)
 
@@ -21,26 +21,26 @@ The networking hub or networking landing page is where you can get an overview o
 
 These improvements are worth mentioning:
 
-* Public network access/Access restrictions. It will show you the current setting and if you have restrictions configured. We also added visibility of the special configuration of `null` where it uses implicit/default behavior.
+* Public network access/Access restrictions will show you the current setting and if you have restrictions configured. We also added visibility into the special configuration of `null`, where access restrictions use implicit/default behavior.
 * Private endpoint IP shows up in inbound addresses.
 * Status of NAT gateway, NSG and UDR configured on integration subnet and links for fast inspection/configuration.
 
 ## Domain names
 
-Domain names are now visible in the overview page and you will see both default and custom domain name. We also added a link for easy configuration of custom domain.
+Domain names are now visible in the overview page and you will see both the default and custom domain name. We also added a link for easy configuration of the custom domain.
 
 ![Azure portal domain names]({{site.baseurl}}/media/2024/02/domains.png)
 
 ## Virtual network integration
 
-App Service has two types of [virtual network integration](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/app-service/overview-vnet-integration); Regional and Gateway-based. Gateway-based is only available on Windows and account only for about 2% of our network integrations, so we decided to create a brand new page focusing only on regional integration. It is much faster and we can include all the relevant information that does not apply to gateway-based integrations. Don't worry, you can still access the gateway-based integration page from the link at the top.
+App Service has two types of [virtual network integration](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/app-service/overview-vnet-integration): Regional and Gateway-based. Gateway-based is only available on Windows App Service and only accounts for about 2% of our network integrations, so we decided to create a brand new page focusing only on regional integration. It is much faster and we can include all the relevant information that does not apply to gateway-based integrations. Don't worry, you can still access the gateway-based integration page from the link at the top of the page.
 
 ![Azure portal virtual network integration]({{site.baseurl}}/media/2024/02/virtual-network-integration.png)
 
 Key improvements to this page:
 
 * Information about subnet IP availability.
-* Configure connections to more than one subnet per App Service plan.
+* Ability to configure connections to more than one subnet per App Service plan.
 * Manage configuration routing.
 * Direct configuration of NAT gateway.
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ The [access restriction](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/app-service/overview-
 
 ## DNS configuration
 
-We are almost ready with our [DNS](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/app-service/overview-name-resolution) configuration page. We are making the final changes and you should start seeing this in Azure portal by the end of Q1 2024. I'll give you a sneak peek here of what to expect.
+We are almost ready with our [DNS](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/app-service/overview-name-resolution) configuration page. We are making the final changes and you should start seeing this in the Azure portal by the end of Q1 2024. I'll give you a sneak peek here of what to expect.
 
 From the networking hub, you will quickly see if you have custom servers or settings configured.