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_includes/build/best_practices_download_speed.html

@@ -4,9 +4,7 @@ <h3>
   </h3>
 
   <p>
-    Requesting compressed data can help increase your download speed. You can request compressed data files by
-    specifying the `Accept-Encoding: gzip` header in your download requests. After you finish downloading, uncompress
-    (unzip) the file to access your data.
+    Requesting compressed data can help increase your download speed. You can request compressed data files by specifying the `Accept-Encoding: gzip` header in your download requests.
   </p>
 
   <H4>
@@ -20,6 +18,5 @@ <H4>
   <h3>
     Downloading files concurrently
   </h3>
-  <p>When multiple files are available, you don't need to wait for one download to complete before starting the next.
-    You may make multiple download requests concurrently</p>
+  <p>When multiple files are available, you don't need to wait for one download to complete before starting the next. You may make multiple download requests concurrently.</p>
 </div>

_includes/build/requesting_data_all_three.html

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ <h3 class="ds-c-alert__heading"> Files expire after 24 hours.</h3>
 	</div>
 
 	<p>
-		The "Accept-Encoding: gzip" header is optional, but will return a significantly smaller (40X smaller) file with a faster download speed. Follow our recommended best practices for <a href="#speeding-up-downloads" class="in-text__link">speeding up downloads</a>.
+		The "Accept-Encoding: gzip" header is optional, but will return a significantly smaller (about 30X smaller) file with a faster download speed. Follow our recommended best practices for <a href="#speeding-up-downloads" class="in-text__link">speeding up downloads</a>.
 	</p>
 	<p>
 		The response will be the requested data as FHIR resources in NDJSON format. Each file related to a different resource type will appear separately and labeled as to which resource type it contains. Examples of data from each Resource Type are available in the guide to working with BCDA data.