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Updated play computer guide #1653
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This generally looks great! I left a few small suggestions. Some of them are breaking up longer sentences a bit - I recommend running text through https://hemingwayapp.com/readability-checker to get pointers for which parts are likely harder to comprehend, as a lot of our community are non-native English speakers.
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Looks great, thank you!

What does this change?
Combined some of the content from various places into a single playing computer guide.
Make it useful for volunteers or trainees.
Includes two worked examples
Related locations that I have not changed :
Org Content?
One guide page
Checklist
resolves #1079