updated DESCRIPTION as per CRAN comments

Cumulocity-IoT · Oct 14, 2019 · 7a151f8 · 7a151f8
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 This package was submitted to CRAN on 2019-10-10.
-Once it is accepted, delete this file and tag the release (commit ca069713c3).
+Once it is accepted, delete this file and tag the release (commit 07b0f17d21).
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 Package: cumulocityr
 Type: Package
-Title: R Client for the Cumulocity API
+Title: Client for the 'Cumulocity' API
 Version: 0.1.0
 Authors@R: c(
  person("Dmitriy", "Bolotov", email = "rpmmlsupport@softwareag.com", role = c("aut", "cre")),
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ Suggests:
  knitr,
  rmarkdown,
  covr
-Description: R client for the Cumulocity API.
-License: GPL-3 | file LICENSE
+Description: Access the 'Cumulocity' API and retrieve data on devices, measurements, and events. Documentation for the API can be found at <https://www.cumulocity.com/guides/reference/rest-implementation/>.
+License: GPL-3
 URL: https://softwareag.github.io/cumulocityr/, https://github.com/SoftwareAG/cumulocityr
 BugReports: https://github.com/SoftwareAG/cumulocityr/issues
 Encoding: UTF-8

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diff --git a/R/cumulocityr.R b/R/cumulocityr.R
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 # GNU General Public License for details (http://www.gnu.org/licenses/).
 # #############################################################################
 
-#' R Client for the Cumulocity API
+#' Client for the Cumulocity API
 #'
-#' This package contains functions to interact with the Cumulocity API.
+#' Access the 'Cumulocity' API and retrieve data on devices, measurements, and events.
 #'
 #' @section Functions:
 #' \itemize{

diff --git a/cran-comments.md b/cran-comments.md
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+## Resubmission
+This is a resubmission. In this version I have:
+
+* Provided a link to the used API in the Description field of DESCRIPTION.
+
+* Added single quotes to software and API names in the Title and Description.
+
+* Updated the Description to not start with "This package", package name, title or similar.
+
+* Removed the redundant GPL-3 LICENSE file.
+
+* Changed \dontrun{} to \donttest{} in package documentation.
+
+
 ## Test environments
 * Local Linux Mint install, R 3.6.1
 * ubuntu 14.04 (on travis-ci), R 3.6.1
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 * This is a new release.
-* The word Cumulocity is spelled correctly.
-
+* The word Cumulocity is spelled correctly.
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