Update Personal Bank Account success screen

[MariaHCD]

cc: @ctkochan22

Details

Follow up to: #9423 (#9423 (comment))

Improve the success screen shown after a user adds a PBA successfully.

Fixed Issues

$ https://github.com/Expensify/Expensify/issues/218858

Tests

• Add a PBA via Settings > Payments > Add Payment Method
• Select Wells Fargo and login in via sandbox credentials
• Verify you see the success screen

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QA Steps

• Same as test steps

Screenshots

Web

New.Expensify.6.mp4

Mobile Web

Desktop

[madmax330]

Looks good mostly, just one small code question.

[madmax330]

should we be hardcoding these? Or is there a style that we apply so that it's consistent on different platforms?

[ctkochan22]

It seems like we should

[MariaHCD]

Do you mean the hardcoded values for the height and width for the icon?

[ctkochan22]

Actually I guess we hardcode in a few other places as well. Seems strange, but its probably fine for now

[madmax330]

Yeah, I was thinking the "correct" height/width for web, might be too big for a smaller form factor. But NAB, looks like it's fine.

[madmax330]

Also since this is a new UI addition, can you add at least 1 screenshot on the smaller for factors (mobile or mweb) so that we can make sure the size looks right there?

[MariaHCD]

Also since this is a new UI addition, can you add at least 1 screenshot on the smaller for factors (mobile or mweb) so that we can make sure the size looks right there?

Added a screenshot on mobile web! (I'm having a bit of trouble getting the ios simulator to work)

[madmax330]

Merge conflicts 😬

[MariaHCD]

Updated!

[OSBotify]

✋ This PR was not deployed to staging yet because QA is ongoing. It will be automatically deployed to staging after the next production release.

[OSBotify]

🚀 Deployed to staging by @madmax330 in version: 1.1.87-0 🚀

platform	result
🤖 android 🤖	failure ❌
🖥 desktop 🖥	failure ❌
🍎 iOS 🍎	failure ❌
🕸 web 🕸	failure ❌

[yuwenmemon]

@ctkochan22 or @madmax330 can you internally QA this one and check it off the Checklist if it passes?

[ctkochan22]

Done:

[OSBotify]

🚀 Deployed to production by @yuwenmemon in version: 1.1.87-9 🚀

platform	result
🤖 android 🤖	success ✅
🖥 desktop 🖥	success ✅
🍎 iOS 🍎	success ✅
🕸 web 🕸	success ✅