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Revise 'Many commanders ...' to Improve Grammar and Engagement #546

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magge-faf opened this issue May 19, 2024 · 0 comments · Fixed by #555
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Revise 'Many commanders ...' to Improve Grammar and Engagement #546

magge-faf opened this issue May 19, 2024 · 0 comments · Fixed by #555

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Suggested Improvements about the phrase: "Many commanders playing right now"

Correct grammar: Change to "Many commanders are playing right now."

Alternatively, I would highly advise using a more engaging and contextually appropriate phrase when we can not showcase the current number of active games/players anymore, such as:

"Join the battlefield!" or "Fight for glory!", because it aligns far better to the "Play Now" Button, right next to it.

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