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 end
 ```
 
-Now any topic sent by a client that starts with `"rooms:"` will be routed to our RoomChannel. Next, we'll define a `RoomChannel` module to manage our chat room messages.
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+Now, whenever a client sends a message whose topic starts with `"rooms:"`, it will be routed to our RoomChannel. Next, we'll define a `RoomChannel` module to manage our chat room messages.
 
 ### Joining Channels
 

diff --git a/introduction/I_learning.md b/introduction/I_learning.md
@@ -5,8 +5,9 @@ Here's a list of other resources for learning about Phoenix and some of the proj
 - [Official Documentation](http://hexdocs.pm/phoenix/) (current stable release)
 
 #### Videos
-Phoenix author Chris McCord's ElixirConfEu 2015 keynote covers the roadmap to Phoenix 1.0.
+Phoenix author Chris McCord's videos covering the roadmap to Phoenix 1.0 and an overview of the current state of Phoenix.
 - [Phoenix Takes Flight](http://www.chrismccord.com/blog/2015/05/09/elixirconfeu-keynote-phoenix-takes-flight/), Chris McCord
+- [Phoenix - a framework for the modern web](https://vimeo.com/131633172), Chris McCord
 
 ## Plug
 The Elixir middleware layer that Phoenix makes extensive use of.
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-    Now any topic sent by a client that starts with `"rooms:"` will be routed to our RoomChannel. Next, we'll define a `RoomChannel` module to manage our chat room messages.
+    Now, whenever a client sends a message whose topic starts with `"rooms:"`, it will be routed to our RoomChannel. Next, we'll define a `RoomChannel` module to manage our chat room messages.
     ### Joining Channels
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