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Copyedit of the 2020 Page Weight chapter #1894

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Makes progress on #919 and #1432

A standard enough edit so hopefully nothing too controversial!

Made the following changes:

  • Added second data to graphs label where it fitted.
  • A few more links.
  • Moved figures before explanation and added a couple of sentences.
  • Split up some lengthier paragraphs.
  • Minor rewordings.
  • Spelling and grammar checking.
  • Fixed featured_quote preventing it from showing (no colon in this YAML-like syntax so have to use :
  • Removed Unedited tag.

This version: https://20210116t122847-dot-webalmanac.uk.r.appspot.com/en/2020/page-weight
Production: https://almanac.httparchive.org/en/2020/page-weight

@tunetheweb tunetheweb added the editing Content excellence label Jan 16, 2021
@tunetheweb tunetheweb added this to the 2020 Content Writing milestone Jan 16, 2021
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@tunetheweb tunetheweb merged commit 8f93e37 into main Jan 17, 2021
@tunetheweb tunetheweb deleted the page-weight-2020-edits branch January 17, 2021 21:45
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