small text edits to alpha release draft #41369

Job	Run time
opentrons app frontend unit tests	20m 9s
opentrons app-shell unit tests on windows-2022	9m 12s
Determine build variant and type	1s
opentrons discovery-client unit tests on windows-2022	6m 54s
opentrons app-shell unit tests on ubuntu-22.04	3m 49s
opentrons app-shell-odd unit tests on ubuntu-22.04	3m 41s
opentrons discovery-client unit tests on ubuntu-22.04	5m 57s
opentrons app-shell unit tests on macos-latest	4m 30s
opentrons app-shell-odd unit tests on macos-latest	5m 13s
opentrons discovery-client unit tests on macos-latest	6m 49s
Build ${{ matrix.variant }} ${{ matrix.target }} app on ${{ matrix.os }}	0s
Deploy built app artifacts to S3	0s
	1h 6m 15s

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