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adoc/SAP-S4HA10-setupguide-sle15.adoc

@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@ for customers of different sizes and industries.
 The here described HA setup is based on cluster-controlled file systems for the
 SAP central services working directories.
 This setup with cluster-controlled file system resources has been obsoleted by the
-so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems still
-is supported for existing clusters.
-For deploying new HA clusters please use the simple-mount setup, described in
+so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems
+is still supported for existing clusters.
+For deploying new HA clusters, please use the simple-mount setup, described in
 "SAP S/4 HANA - Enqueue Replication 2 High Availability Cluster With Simple Mount - Setup Guide"
 (https://documentation.suse.com/sbp/sap/html/SAP_S4HA10_SetupGuide_SimpleMount-SLE15).
 
@@ -122,9 +122,9 @@ This guide focuses on the high availability of the central services. For {saphan
 consult the guides for the performance-optimized or cost-optimized scenario (see <<sec.resource>>).
 
 NOTE: This setup with cluster-controlled file system resources has been obsoleted by the
-so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems still
-is supported for existing clusters.
-For deploying new HA clusters please use the simple mount-setup, described in
+so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems
+is still supported for existing clusters.
+For deploying new HA clusters, please use the simple-mount setup, described in
 "SAP S/4 HANA - Enqueue Replication 2 High Availability Cluster With Simple Mount - Setup Guide"
 (https://documentation.suse.com/sbp/sap/html/SAP_S4HA10_SetupGuide_SimpleMount-SLE15).
 

adoc/sap-nw740-sle15-setupguide.adoc

@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@ customers of different sizes and industries.
 The here described HA setup is based on cluster-controlled file systems for the
 SAP central services working directories.
 This setup with cluster-controlled file system resources has been obsoleted by the
-so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems still
-is supported for existing clusters.
-For deploying new HA clusters please use the simple-mount setup, described in
+so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems
+is still supported for existing clusters.
+For deploying new HA clusters, please use the simple-mount setup, described in
 SUSE TID "Use of Filesystem resource for ASCS/ERS HA setup not possible"
 (https://www.suse.com/support/kb/doc/?id=000019944) and in the
 "SAP S/4 HANA - Enqueue Replication 2 High Availability Cluster With Simple Mount - Setup Guide"
@@ -148,12 +148,12 @@ documentation and resources").
 
 For {saphana} system replication, follow the guides for the performance- or cost-optimized scenario.
 
-NOTE: The here described HA setup is based on cluster-controlled file systems for the
+NOTE: The HA setup described here is based on cluster-controlled file systems for the
 SAP central services working directories.
 This setup with cluster-controlled file system resources has been obsoleted by the
-so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems still
-is supported for existing clusters.
-For deploying new HA clusters please use the simple-mount setup, described in
+so-called simple-mount setup. The setup with cluster-controlled file systems
+is still supported for existing clusters.
+For deploying new HA clusters, please use the simple-mount setup, described in
 SUSE TID "Use of Filesystem resource for ASCS/ERS HA setup not possible"
 (https://www.suse.com/support/kb/doc/?id=000019944) and in the
 "SAP S/4 HANA - Enqueue Replication 2 High Availability Cluster With Simple Mount - Setup Guide"