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WIPWorking on it. Branch probably exists.Working on it. Branch probably exists.enhancementWill improve the guide but is not a bug or blocker.Will improve the guide but is not a bug or blocker.
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Guidance to add:
Use "this", "that", "these", or "those" followed by a noun.
Original example 1:
"This causes SSH to lose the recorded identities of the remote systems."
Improvement example 1:
Option 1:
"This action causes SSH to lose the recorded identities of the remote systems."
Option 2:
"Consequently, SSH loses the recorded identities of the remote systems."
Original example 2:
"A site can use these to self-allocate a private routable IP address space inside the organization."
Improvement example 2:
"A site can use these unique local addresses to self-allocate a private routable IP address space inside the organization."
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WIPWorking on it. Branch probably exists.Working on it. Branch probably exists.enhancementWill improve the guide but is not a bug or blocker.Will improve the guide but is not a bug or blocker.