Applied various fixes for 6.0 #407
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@daobrien @nmuller66 @sffrench These style guide fixes are ready for review. |
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These fixes are for the upcoming October release 6.0 of the style guide. |
en-US/Grammar.xml
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| <entry> The <command>fsck</command> utility performs a file system verification on the XFS file system residing on the <filename>/dev/vdb1</filename> partition. </entry> | ||
| <entry> The <command>fsck</command> utility verifies the XFS file system on the <filename>/dev/vdb1</filename> partition. </entry> |
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The example is much better (I've been meaning to fix this for ages) but it's also not quite accurate. If you run fsck with no args it checks all file systems on all devices. If you want to check a specific file system then you have to pass it as an arg. E.g., fsck /dev/hd1
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Updated the command to include arguments.
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Small update to the example following Phil's feedback.
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| <entry> It is possible that the scheduled snapshot takes some time to be created. </entry> | ||
| <entry> Creating the scheduled snapshot might take time. </entry> |
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Everything takes time. Can we elaborate a bit? Something like "Creating the snapshot will take more or less time depending on the size of the system." Or maybe something different altogether?
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Replaced with a different example.
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| <!-- If you use DocBook or AsciiDoc to build itemized or ordered lists, you can choose between normal spacing or the <option>compact</option> attribute to specify the spacing between list items. | ||
| In AsciiDoc, compact spacing is not supported for variable (definition) lists. | ||
| DocBook and AsciiDoc use the <option>normal</option> spacing attribute by default. | ||
| <!-- In AsciiDoc? --> | ||
| DocBook and AsciiDoc use the <option>normal</option> spacing attribute by default. --> |
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Addresses these issues:
#24
#79
#364
#369
#373
#404
#406