Simplify introduction of GettingStarted

editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/gettingstarted/GettingStarted.tid

@@ -4,12 +4,10 @@ tags: [[Working with TiddlyWiki]]
 title: GettingStarted
 type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki
 
-The easiest way to use ~TiddlyWiki is to sign up for a free account with [[Tiddlyhost|https://tiddlyhost.com/]], an independently run community service. If you find Tiddlyhost useful, please consider [[donation or sponsorship|https://tiddlyhost.com/donate]].
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 Click here to download an empty copy of ~TiddlyWiki: {{$:/editions/tw5.com/snippets/download-empty-button}}
 
-The next step is to choose a method for saving changes. There's a wide variety of methods available, with different features and limitations. Click on the badge for a method to see more information about it. You can also click on one of the platform filters to restrict the listing to methods that work with that platform.
+The next step is to choose a method for saving changes. There is a wide variety of methods available, with different features and limitations. Click on the badge for a method to see more information about it. You can also click on one of the platform filters to restrict the listing to methods that work with that platform.
 
-<<.warning "Don't attempt to use the browser ''File''/''Save'' menu option to save changes (it doesn't work)">><br/><br/>
+<<.warning "Do not attempt to use the browser ''File''/''Save'' menu option to save changes (it does not work expected)">>
 
 {{Saving}}

editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/saving/Saving on TiddlyHost.tid

@@ -15,3 +15,5 @@ type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki
 [[TiddlyHost.com|https://tiddlyhost.com/]] is a hosting service for TiddlyWiki created by Simon Baird. Once you sign up and confirm your email you can create "sites", (i.e. ~TiddlyWikis), with support for online saving. Sites can be private or public, and you can optionally list them on the taggable and searchable [[TiddlyHost Hub|https://tiddlyhost.com/hub]] where they'll be discoverable by others.
 
 Unlike [[TiddlySpot|Saving on TiddlySpot]], [[TiddlyHost|https://tiddlyhost.com]] is secure, open source, and has proper support for TiddlyWiki5. It also allows uploading existing ~TiddlyWiki files, supports TiddlyWikiClassic, and lets you claim ownership of your ~TiddlySpot sites. For more information see the [[FAQ|https://github.com/simonbaird/tiddlyhost/wiki/FAQ]] and the [[About|https://tiddlyhost.com/about]] page.
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+If you find Tiddlyhost useful, please consider [[donation or sponsorship|https://tiddlyhost.com/donate]].