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DVSAdmin/Views/PublicInterestCheck/PublicInterestCheck.cshtml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
                     </span>
                 </summary>
                 <div class="govuk-details__text">
-                    In this section, you will be conducting the primary and secondary checks. This is part of the 2i check, which enhances security by ensuring that the decision-making process does not depend on a single individual. Users acting as first reviewers will be able to complete the first step of the review, but will be blocked from completing the checks as second reviewer.
+                    In this section, you can complete primary or secondary public interest checks. This is part of the 2i check, which enhances security by ensuring that the decision-making process does not depend on a single individual. You can only complete either the primary check or the secondary check on any application.
                 </div>
             </details>
 

DVSAdmin/Views/PublicInterestPrimaryCheck/PrimaryCheckReview.cshtml

@@ -68,19 +68,19 @@
 
                             <ol class="govuk-list govuk-list--number">
                                 <li>
-                                    As the first reviewer, you will be conducting the primary checks. This is part of the 2i check, which enhances security by ensuring that the decision-making process does not depend on a single individual.
+                                    This is the primary check. This is part of the 2i check, which enhances security by ensuring that the decision making process does not depend on a single individual.
                                 </li>
                                 <li>
-                                    Using the company information submitted, decide whether to approve or reject each section. Selecting ‘Approve’ means that the information submitted meets the pre-defined criteria while ‘Reject’ means you have found evidences or reasons that go against the criteria.
+                                    Using the company information submitted, decide whether to approve or reject each section. Selecting ‘Approve’ means that the checks meet required criteria. ‘Reject’ means you have found evidence that the organisation does not meet the required standard. If the check is not applicable, you should select ‘Approve’.
                                 </li>
                                 <li>
                                     If you wish to submit your review at a later time, you can select the ‘Save as draft’ button located at the bottom of the page. You can only do so once you have completed all sections.
                                 </li>
                                 <li>
-                                    Once you have completed all sections, decide whether to pass or fail the primary check. ‘Pass Primary Check’ means that the provider has met all the criteria and been approved for each section. ‘Fail Primary Check’ means that there is at least one section that the provider has been rejected for.
+                                    Once you have completed all sections, decide whether to pass or fail the primary check. ‘Pass primary check’ means that the provider has met all the criteria and been approved for each section. ‘Fail primary check’ means that there is at least one section where the provider has not met the required standard.
                                 </li>
                                 <li>
-                                    Once you have selected your decision, this application will then be sent to another member of DSIT for a secondary check.
+                                    Once you have confirmed your decision, this application will be sent to another member of DSIT for a secondary check.
                                 </li>
                             </ol>
                         </div>

DVSAdmin/Views/PublicInterestSecondaryCheck/Review/SecondaryCheckReview.cshtml

@@ -65,19 +65,19 @@
                         <ol class="govuk-list govuk-list--number">
 
                             <li>
-                                As the second reviewer, you will be conducting the secondary checks. This is part of the 2i check, which enhances security by ensuring that the decision-making process does not depend on a single individual.
+                                This is the secondary check. This is part of the 2i check, which enhances security by ensuring that the decision-making process does not depend on a single individual.
 
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                                The application below was reviewed by a first reviewer, who is another member of DSIT. Review the application thoroughly, paying close attention to the decision on each section and the comments made by the first reviewer.
+                                A first reviewer has already completed the primary check on this application. Review the application thoroughly, paying close attention to the decision on each section and the comments made by the first reviewer.
 
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                                If you agree with the first reviewer's decision, you can proceed by selecting the button that corresponds to the first reviewer’s decision.
+                                If you agree with the first reviewer’s decision, you can proceed by selecting the button that corresponds with the primary check decision.
 
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                                If you disagree with the first reviewer’s decision, you may need to request further clarification and send the application back for another review.
+                                If you disagree with the first reviewer’s decision, you may need to request for further clarification and send the application back for another review.
                             </li>
                         </ol>
                     </details>

DVSAdmin/Views/RegisterManagement/PartialViews/_ProviderContactView.cshtml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
             </div>
             <div class="govuk-summary-list__row">
                 <dt class="govuk-summary-list__key">
-                    Telephone number
+                    Public telephone number
                 </dt>
                 <dd class="govuk-summary-list__value">
                     @Model.ProviderTelephoneNumber

DVSAdmin/Views/RegisterManagement/PublishService.cshtml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 @using DVSAdmin.BusinessLogic.Models;
 @model ProviderProfileDto;
 @{
-    ViewData["Title"] = "Publish service";
+    ViewData["Title"] = "You are publishing the following service provider on the register";
     Layout = "~/Views/Shared/_LayoutLoggedIn.cshtml";
 }