[EN] update Platform as a service #3218
Conversation
Updated the file as requested, ref: cncf#3036 Signed-off-by: Mallikarjun Rayar <mallikarjun.rayar@infosys.com>
manojrayar
requested review from
caniszczyk,
seokho-son,
iamNoah1,
jihoon-seo,
nate-double-u and
castrojo
as code owners
✅ Deploy Preview for cncfglossary ready!
To edit notification comments on pull requests, go to your Netlify site configuration. |
nate-double-u
changed the title
There was a problem hiding this comment.
I am not an official reviewer for the English version, but...
It looks like you have two PRs open for the PaaS page - the other is #3127. One page is sufficient. It would be better to close one of them, thanks
There was a problem hiding this comment.
Thanks @manojrayar Nice update on this term. I only have some minor suggestions.
| By offering a pre-built environment, it eliminates the need for companies to spend time and resources on managing servers, | ||
| storage, and development tools. This allows them to focus their efforts on what truly matters - creating innovative and | ||
| creative applications. | ||
|
|
||
|
|
||
| ## How it helps |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
I would love to see a bit more information about how PaaS helps. Everything you said is correct, maybe we can add a bit more about that it utilizes IaaS or bare metal directly to dedicate infrastructure resources. Also maybe we can add that we talk about abstractions and that we have an interface for using a PaaS that abstracts everything away.
There was a problem hiding this comment.
Hi @iamNoah1 , i have updated the file according to your inputs, kindly check and review.
There was a problem hiding this comment.
@manojrayar Thanks for the ping and patience.
I understand what you did. You put the information in Which Problem it solves section which is not the correct place. The text in the Which Problem it solves section was fine before. You can put your added text to the how it helps section.
And I would remove the following sentence as it feels redundant: is abstraction allows companies to focus on application development without being burdened by the intricacies of managing the underlying technology
Signed-off-by: Mallikarjun Rayar <mallikarjun.rayar@infosys.com>
|
Hi @iamNoah1 , Friendly ping. |
| By offering a pre-built environment, it eliminates the need for companies to spend time and resources on managing servers, | ||
| storage, and development tools. This allows them to focus their efforts on what truly matters - creating innovative and | ||
| creative applications. | ||
|
|
||
|
|
||
| ## How it helps |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
@manojrayar Thanks for the ping and patience.
I understand what you did. You put the information in Which Problem it solves section which is not the correct place. The text in the Which Problem it solves section was fine before. You can put your added text to the how it helps section.
And I would remove the following sentence as it feels redundant: is abstraction allows companies to focus on application development without being burdened by the intricacies of managing the underlying technology
Updated the file as requested, ref: #3036
Describe your changes
Updated the existing term Platform as a service.
Related issue number or link (ex:
resolves #issue-number)#3036
Checklist before opening this PR (put
xin the checkboxes)git commit -s) is to affirm that commits comply DCO. If you are working locally, you could add an alias to yourgitconfigby runninggit config --global alias.ci "commit -s".