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* CoAP {{RFC7252}} and Group Communication for CoAP {{I-D.ietf-core-groupcomm-bis}}.

* OSCORE {{RFC8613}}, and Group OSCORE {{I-D.ietf-core-oscore-groupcomm}}.
* OSCORE {{RFC8613}} and Group OSCORE {{I-D.ietf-core-oscore-groupcomm}}.

* CDDL {{RFC8610}}, CBOR {{RFC8949}}, and CBOR sequences {{RFC8742}}

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The following is an example of HTTP batch response sent by P to C, as a reply to the client's original unicast group request

For readability, 'base64url(X)' denotes the base64url encoding of X withouth padding (see {{Section 5 of RFC4648}}).
For readability, 'base64url(cri'X')' denotes the base64url encoding of cri'X' withouth padding (see {{Section 5 of RFC4648}}), and cri'X' denotes the byte serialization of a CRI corresponding to the URI X.

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HTTP/1.1 200 OK
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HTTP/1.1 200 OK
Content-Type: text/plain
Content-Length: <INDIVIDUAL_RESPONSE_1_CONTENT_LENGTH>
Reply-To: base64url(coap://S1_ADDR:G_PORT)
Reply-To: base64url(cri'coap://S1_ADDR:G_PORT')

Body: Done!
--batch_foo_bar
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HTTP/1.1 200 OK
Content-Type: text/plain
Content-Length: <INDIVIDUAL_RESPONSE_2_CONTENT_LENGTH>
Reply-To: base64url(coap://S2_ADDR:S2_PORT)
Reply-To: base64url(cri'coap://S2_ADDR:S2_PORT')

Body: More than done!
--batch_foo_bar--
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|--------|-------------------|-----------|
| TBD2 | Reply-To | {{&SELF}} |
|--------|-------------------|-----------|
| TBD3 | Group-ETag | {{&SELF}} |
| TBD3 | Group-ETag | {{&SELF}} |
{: #tab-iana-coap-option-numbers title="New CoAP Option Numbers" align="center"}

## Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Field Name Registry {#iana-message-headers}
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| Multicast-Timeout" | | |
| | | |
| | | |
|----------------------------------->| / C embeds the | |
| Src: C_ADDR:C_PORT | group URI into its | |
| Dst: p.example.com:P_PORT | request to the | |
| Uri-Host: "group1.com" | proxy P / | |
|----------------------------------->| | |
| Src: C_ADDR:C_PORT | | |
| Dst: p.example.com:P_PORT | | |
| Uri-Host: "group1.com" | | |
| Uri-Path: "r" | | |
| Multicast-Timeout: 60 | | |
| | | |
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| | | |
| | | |
|---------------------------------->| / Request intended | |
| Src: C_ADDR:C_PORT | only to S1 for same | |
| Dst: D1_ADDR:D1_PORT | resource /r / | |
| Src: C_ADDR:C_PORT | only to S1 for the | |
| Dst: D1_ADDR:D1_PORT | same resource /r / | |
| Uri-Path: "r" | | |
| | | |
| | Src: P_ADDR:P_PORT | |
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| | | |
|----------------------------------------------------->| |
| Src: C_ADDR:C_PORT | / Request intended | |
| Dst: S1.ADDR:S1_PORT | only to S1 for same | |
| Uri-Path: "r" | resource /r / | |
| Dst: S1.ADDR:S1_PORT | only to S1 for the | |
| Uri-Path: "r" | same resource /r / | |
| | | |
| | | |
|<-----------------------------------------------------| |
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* Response-Forwarding option:

- Renames as "Reply-To".
- Renamed as "Reply-To".

- Revised encoding to use CRIs.

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