Docs for Qlik and MicroStrategy #68
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Anchor and heading need to be updated to Qlik:
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Qlik Sense Desktop
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A few general comments:
I would strongly advise minimizing the use of screen captures. Keeping screen caps up to date is time consuming, keeping things up to date for third party applications that change without notice is especially challenging. Step-by-step procedures can also be problematic, but in this case there's not much way around it.
Stick to present tense instead of future tense. Just tell the reader what to do, not what they will need to do. :-)
In general, we follow the Google UX writing guidelines for talking about UI elements: https://developers.google.com/style/ui-elements.
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| Once the application is launched, you'll first need to create a _New Dossier_: | ||
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I'd replace this with an intro that sets the context--something like: "To use the Elasticsearch ODBC driver to load data into MicroStrategy:"
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| To import into the _New Dossier_ just opened, press on the _New Data_ button in the _DATASETS_ column: | ||
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Instead of using headings for the images, I'd turn these into numbered steps. The description of the step should follow the step text, rather than precede it:
. Create a Dossier.
. Click New Data in the DATASETS column to import data into the dossier. This opens a dialog where you can select a data source.
. Click the _Databases_icon to select the data source.
And so on...
- fix anchor and heading for Qlik page - switched steps to numbered lists - few rephrasings
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Thanks for the suggestions and needed fixes. Hopefully addressed with last commit. |
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as agreed with @debadair, will merge now and open issues later if need be. |
* add MicroStrategy Desktop to list of applications * add Qlik Sense Desktop to the list of applications * various fixes, formatting and content - fix anchor and heading for Qlik page - switched steps to numbered lists - few rephrasings
This PR adds the config steps to use ODBC with Qlik Sense Desktop and MicroStrategy Destkop applications.