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[Docs] Remove first person "I" from Getting started #27155

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When reading the getting started tutorial I was occasionally confused by the
occurence of a first person "I" that was refered to as if in a blog post, but it
is unclear who is talking here. I think it would be better to avoid this style
and switch to an unpersonal style in the reference.

When reading the getting started tutorial I was occasionally confused by the
occurence of a first person "I" that was refered to as if in a blog post, but it
is unclear who is talking here. I think it would be better to avoid this style
and switch to an unpersonal style in the reference.
@cbuescher cbuescher added >docs General docs changes >enhancement review labels Oct 27, 2017
@cbuescher cbuescher changed the title [Docs] Remove first person narrator from Getting started [Docs] Remove first person "I" from Getting started Oct 29, 2017
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I agree with you @cbuescher

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@javanna thanks for the review

@cbuescher cbuescher merged commit 8e62314 into elastic:master Oct 30, 2017
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Avoid first person style and consistently switch to an unpersonal style in the getting started docs.
cbuescher added a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 30, 2017
Avoid first person style and consistently switch to an unpersonal style in the getting started docs.
cbuescher added a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 30, 2017
Avoid first person style and consistently switch to an unpersonal style in the getting started docs.
@lcawl lcawl added v6.0.0-rc2 and removed v6.0.0 labels Oct 30, 2017
jasontedor added a commit to olcbean/elasticsearch that referenced this pull request Oct 30, 2017
* master: (63 commits)
  [Docs] Fix note in bucket_selector
  [Docs] Fix indentation of examples (elastic#27168)
  [Docs] Clarify `span_not` query behavior for non-overlapping matches (elastic#27150)
  [Docs] Remove first person "I" from getting started (elastic#27155)
  [Docs] Correct link target for datatype murmur3 (elastic#27143)
  Fix division by zero in phrase suggester that causes assertion to fail
  Enable Docstats with totalSizeInBytes for 6.1.0
  Adds average document size to DocsStats (elastic#27117)
  Upgrade Painless from ANTLR 4.5.1-1 to  ANTLR 4.5.3. (elastic#27153)
  Exists template needs a template name (elastic#25988)
  [Tests] Fix occasional test failure due to two random values being the same
  Fix beidermorse phonetic token filter for unspecified `languageset` (elastic#27112)
  Fix max score tracking with field collapsing (elastic#27122)
  [Doc] Add Ingest CSV Processor Plugin to plugin as a community plugin (elastic#27105)
  Removed the beta tag from cross-cluster search
  fixed typo in ConstructingObjectParse (elastic#27129)
  Allow for the Painless Definition to have multiple instances (elastic#27096)
  Apply missing request options to the expand phase (elastic#27118)
  Only pull SegmentReader once in getSegmentInfo (elastic#27121)
  Fix BWC for discovery stats
  ...
jasontedor added a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 30, 2017
* 6.x:
  Refactor internal engine
  [Docs] Fix note in bucket_selector
  Added release notes for 6.0.0-rc2
  [Docs] Fix indentation of examples (#27168)
  [Docs] Clarify `span_not` query behavior for non-overlapping matches (#27150)
  [Docs] Remove first person "I" from getting started (#27155)
jasontedor added a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 30, 2017
* master:
  Refactor internal engine
  [Docs] #26541: add warning regarding the limit on the number of fields that can be queried at once in the multi_match query.
  [Docs] Fix note in bucket_selector
  [Docs] Fix indentation of examples (#27168)
  [Docs] Clarify `span_not` query behavior for non-overlapping matches (#27150)
  [Docs] Remove first person "I" from getting started (#27155)
@lcawl lcawl removed the v6.1.0 label Dec 12, 2017
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