small fixes to op-conductor page #990
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pages/builders/chain-operators/tools/op-conductor.mdx (7)
87-88: Good addition, consider minor rewording for clarity.The inclusion of information about the op-conductor-ops tool is helpful. To improve clarity, consider rewording slightly:
- You can utilize [op-conductor-ops](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/infra/tree/main/op-conductor-ops) tool to confirm the conductor status between the steps. + You can use the [op-conductor-ops](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/infra/tree/main/op-conductor-ops) tool to confirm the conductor status between steps.This minor change improves readability while maintaining the informative nature of the addition.
143-144: Approved change, consider adding brief explanation.The update to pause sequencer-0 and sequencer-2 instead of sequencer-1 is correct and aligns with the earlier setup instructions. To enhance clarity, consider adding a brief explanation:
- Pause `sequencer-0` &` sequencer-2` conductors with [conductor_pause](#conductor_pause) + Pause `sequencer-0` and `sequencer-2` conductors with [conductor_pause](#conductor_pause) + RPC request. This leaves sequencer-1 active as the bootstrap node.This addition provides context for why these specific sequencers are being paused.
155-156: Approved addition, suggest minor formatting improvement.The new configuration options and explanations are valuable additions. To improve consistency with the document's style, consider this minor formatting change:
- OP_NODE_CONDUCTOR_ENABLED: "true" # this is what commits unsafe blocks to the raft logs - OP_NODE_RPC_ADMIN_STATE: "" # this flag cant be used with conductor + OP_NODE_CONDUCTOR_ENABLED: "true" # This commits unsafe blocks to the raft logs + OP_NODE_RPC_ADMIN_STATE: "" # This flag can't be used with conductorThis change capitalizes the first word in comments and corrects a minor typo ("cant" to "can't"), maintaining a consistent style throughout the document.
193-194: Approved naming convention, suggest clarifying instruction.The use of snake_case in "conductor_paused" is consistent with other method names, which is good. However, using a "paused" check to confirm resumption might be confusing. Consider clarifying the instruction:
- Confirm all conductors successfully resumed with [conductor_paused](#conductor_paused) + Confirm all conductors successfully resumed by checking [conductor_paused](#conductor_paused) returns `false`This change maintains the correct method name while clarifying the expected result when confirming resumption.
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362-386: Approve content, suggest consistent naming convention.The explanation and usage details for the
conductor_overrideLeadermethod are clear and informative. However, the method name uses camelCase, which is inconsistent with other method names in the document. To maintain consistency, consider changing it to snake_case:- #### conductor_overrideLeader + #### conductor_override_leaderAlso, update all references to this method throughout the document to use the snake_case version. This change will improve overall consistency and readability of the documentation.
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427-446: Approved with minor suggestion for clarity.The
conductor_pausedmethod is well-documented with clear usage examples and consistent naming. To improve clarity, consider rewording the description slightly:- Paused returns true if the op-conductor is paused. + The `conductor_paused` method returns true if the op-conductor is paused.This minor change makes the description more explicit about what the method does, maintaining consistency with other method descriptions in the document.
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732-733: Approved addition, suggest minor formatting fix.The inclusion of information about op-conductor-ops in the Next Steps section is valuable and aligns well with its previous mention. To improve formatting, consider this minor change:
- * Get familiar with [op-conductor-ops](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/infra/tree/main/op-conductor-ops)to interact with op-conductor. + * Get familiar with [op-conductor-ops](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/infra/tree/main/op-conductor-ops) to interact with op-conductor.This change adds a space after the closing parenthesis, improving readability.
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[uncategorized] ~167-~167: You might be missing the article “the” here.
Context: ...ting nodes} Add voting nodes to cluster using [conductor_AddServerAsVoter](#con...(AI_EN_LECTOR_MISSING_DETERMINER_THE)
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387-406: Approved: Clear explanation and consistent naming.The
conductor_pausemethod is well-documented with a clear explanation and usage examples. The method name uses snake_case, which is consistent with the recommended naming convention. No changes are needed for this section.
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407-426: Approved: Clear explanation and consistent naming.The
conductor_resumemethod is well-documented with a clear explanation and usage examples. The method name uses snake_case, which is consistent with the recommended naming convention. No changes are needed for this section.
Co-authored-by: Bradley Camacho <42678939+bradleycamacho@users.noreply.github.com>
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Making small updates to op-conductor