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Ommer footnote, link words to maths, Transaction_Receipt #530

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pirapira commented Feb 7, 2018

Please fix the Travis error.

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@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ \subsection{The Transaction} \label{ch:transaction}

\subsection{The Block} \label{ch:block}

The block in Ethereum is the collection of relevant pieces of information (known as the block \textit{header}), $H$, together with information corresponding to the comprised transactions, $\mathbf{T}$,\hypertarget{ommerheaders}{} and a set of other block headers $\mathbf{U}$ that are known to have a parent equal to the present block's parent's parent (such blocks are known as \textit{ommers}\footnote{\textit{ommer} is the most prevalent (not saying much) gender-neutral term to mean ``sibling of parent''; see \url{https://nonbinary.miraheze.org/wiki/Gender_neutral_language\#Aunt.2FUncle}}). The block header contains several pieces of information:
The block in Ethereum is the collection of relevant pieces of information (known as the block \textit{header}), $H$, together with information corresponding to the comprised transactions, $\mathbf{T}$,\hypertarget{ommerheaders}{} and a set of other block headers $\mathbf{U}$ that are known to have a parent equal to the present block's parent's parent (such blocks are known as \textit{ommers}\footnote{\textit{ommer} is the most prevalent (which is not saying much, in that it isn't commonly used) gender-neutral term to mean ``sibling of parent''; see \url{https://nonbinary.miraheze.org/wiki/Gender_neutral_language\#Aunt.2FUncle}}). The block header contains several pieces of information:
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I find this too verbose.

"in that it isn't commonly used" explaining "which is not saying much" annotating "the most prevalent" in the foot note about "ommer".

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I don't know if you get notifications after I make a change, so I'm replying here so that you'll get a notification.

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pirapira commented Feb 9, 2018

Maybe

(not to say it's common)

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ldct commented Feb 12, 2018

I think we can shorten to

``omer" is a gender neutral term to refer to the sibling of a parent \cite

and the interested reader can read the cited text

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Looks good to me.

@pirapira pirapira merged commit fda32b5 into ethereum:master Feb 13, 2018
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