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DISCOVERY-335: Setup IndexPage for docs #525
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Okay, here goes. 1. The actual textual content is too far down the website.Here's my flow to start learning about FSD with this docs setup (excuse the slightly sarcastic language, I'm imitating a busy user):
Yeah, I think it's a bit too hidden away for being so essential. Here's the Gatsby flow, and why they're successful in their structure, in my opinion:
So, what they got right is:
2. The edits to the content of the intro make it harder to comprehend (to me personally)
This section, I remember it from the original intro page (and remember removing it). What I don't like about it is the imparallelism of the options listed there:
So hopefully you can see where I'm going with this — this list feels a bit haphazard in its content, which confuses me as a reader as to what exactly it's trying to tell me. And links, the links are back, nooooooo :D
This huge file system tree thing is nice, but not very suitable for the introduction, imo. The introduction is meant to hammer the following things into the mind of a reader:
This filesystem feels like too much details, so I think we'd better wait with it. Also I think it'd be really nice as an interactive widget, not just a code block, but that's 💄 for the future.
This is kind of a crossroads for the reader. After reading the intro (till the end), they are slightly interested in the methodology, so now they want to learn the particulars. I think it's best at this stage to lead them by the hand to the next page exactly instead of confronting them with a choice. 3. When the very first thing in the docs starts with a caution, I'm immediately worriedWe have this prominent caution block at the very start of the overview page. Me as a reader, I'm used to seeing such things in alpha-stage products, and that caution is usually telling me to expect bugs and be careful in production. We, however, don't really need our users to watch out for anything, and in my opinion it's expected that you won't understand everything about the methodology by simply reading one page out of many that there are. So I'm not sure what this warning is trying to achieve, but it instills anxiety in me as a reader. 4. [minor] Not a fan of those bright blue rectangles around the termsThey are too bright, they hurt my eyes a bit. And also I'm not quite sure why we need to highlight these terms so prominently, they are important, but they're not that important. Now here's my list of suggestions:
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Setup IndexPage docs with simplifying "OVerview" article
https://www.gatsbyjs.com/docs/