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 == Usage
 
-OpenTelemetry comprises a collection of APIs, SDKs, integration tools, and other software components intended to facilitate the generation and control of telemetry data, including traces, metrics, and logs. In an environment where distributed tracing is enabled via OpenTelemetry (which combines OpenTracing and OpenCensus), this specification establishes the necessary behaviors for MicroProfile applications to participate seamlessly.
+link:https://opentelemetry.io/[OpenTelemetry] comprises a collection of APIs, SDKs, integration tools, and other software components intended to facilitate the generation and control of telemetry data, including traces, metrics, and logs. In an environment where distributed tracing is enabled via OpenTelemetry (which combines OpenTracing and OpenCensus), this specification establishes the necessary behaviors for MicroProfile applications to participate seamlessly.
 
 MicroProfile Telemetry 1.0 allows for the exportation of the data it collects to Jaeger or Zipkin and to other systems using variety of exporter.
 

diff --git a/examples/microprofile/telemetry/greeting/README.md b/examples/microprofile/telemetry/greeting/README.md
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 # Helidon MicroProfile Telemetry Example
 
-This example implements demonstrates usage of MP Telemetry Tracing.
+This example demonstrates how to use MP Telemetry Tracing.
 
 ## Build and run
 
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   jaegertracing/all-in-one:1.41
 ```
 
-Run the Secondary service. Go to `secondary` folder and run:
+Run the Secondary service. Go to `secondary` project and run:
 
 With JDK17+
 ```bash
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 ```
 
-Proceed Jaeger UI http://localhost:16686. In the top-down menu select "greeting-service" and click "search button". Tracing information should become available.
+Open a browser and enter the Jaeger URL: http://localhost:16686. Once the site is loaded, open the top-down menu and select "greeting-service" , then click Search. The tracing information should become available.