Design feedback - (Feb. 29, 2024)

[LisaHuang2017]

These are design feedback on Ojuju from its latest update as of Feb. 29, 2024.

Okuju_LH_feedback_290224.pdf

General comments:

• 10. green circles are highlighting spots where a choice should be made, between rounded or pointy corners, where strokes are joining

• watch out for spacing consistency

• /1. Ccedilla, the cedilla is too much on the left

• 2. /Chi can be wider and darker in the Black weight

• 3. /Glottalstop in Black has a too small "head", whereas it looks better balanced in Light

• 4. the J in /IJ can be adjusted to avoid that almost overlap

• 5. /Jcrossedtail, its loop goes below the baseline

• 6. the top right stroke of /K seems of a too different angle in Black compared to the same letter in Light, and its bottom diagonal has a flare that seems too exaggerated

• 7. caron in /Lcaron is placed too far inside

• 8. /Eng in Black could have the bottom right corner placed a bit upward to open up the counter a bit more

• 9. horn diacritic can be slightly bigger, and moved more to the right

• 11. /Tdiagonalstroke has a dark "blob" where the diagonal crosses with T. You can break the diagonal and move a section more to the right, to open up the counter

• 12. /chi has endings that seem way too curved. You should refer their curvature to that of letters with similar shapes like /c

• 13. /glottalstop and similar glyphs: in Black, these look to have a bottom that is misaligned with their hook part

• 14. cedilla in /hcedilla has to be centered, not connected to the bottom left stem

• 15. /ij in both Light and Black are too close to each other

• 16. top and bottom counters in /eight (Black weight) needs to be better balanced, the top counter here is too small

• 17. horizontal stroke of /four could be moved downward

• 18. watch out for alignment of the bottom of /question to its top

• 19. In Black weight, the lines inside the currency symbols could be removed, just like how it has been designed in /bhat

[bghryct]

@LisaHuang2017 we'll be doing a bug hunt soon to squash some of the anchor issues pointed out, and we'll also take a look your feedback during! Thanks for all the help on the SSA projects!