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Admin overview doc #6412
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Craft an Amin Overview and finish up high-level remaining tasks for install docs.
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Spelling fix!
Wrote up admin tasks and interests by categories
Changed H1 to include "Knative"
Link testing and de-emphasizing tables
Link fixes
indented bullets test
Settling on combo or paras with lins and minimal bulleted lists
Worked on Configurations section
Worked on the Monitoring and Observability section
Finished initial write-up for each section
Added blog links (as a test)
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This reads more like a table of contents than an overview, at the moment.
Looking at I'm noticing that right now it's largely an exposition of the left-hand nav (or desired left-hand nav), which doesn't feel like the best use of reading time.
If you look at https://knative.dev/docs/, it starts out with "what this document is about".
In this case, I think the document is about something like:
Knative consists of several on-cluster components alongside client tools like
kn
andfunc
. This page explains how to install and manage Knative on an existing Kubernetes cluster. It assumes that you are generally familiar with Kubernetes, Kubernetes administration, thekubectl
command, and have at least some familiarity with the larger CNCF ecosystem. Additionally, it assumes that you have the ability to install software and manage resources in all clusters in the namespace (cluster-admin
permissions, or equivalent). When you've finished, you will understand the different Knative components, their roles, the Knative philosophy, and how to enable your cluster's users to develop using Knative.
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Comments and suggestions added. Happy to answer questions or explain my reasoning if you have questions. Please respond in the PR.
If I contradict the style guide, go with the style guide.
Processed most reviewer edits
Added "YAML and CLI installations compared" section
Updated Installation section
Installation, CRD, and ConfigMap guidance
Updates and restructuring sections into Administrative tasks table.
link fixes
Table fix
Table tweaks
Minor edits to rebuild
Minor edit
Misc edits
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Admin table is a good organizational aid.
Page headings don't match the left-sidebar TOC entries:
Administration -> Installing Knative
Administration overview -> Overview
Install Knative with YAML -> About YAML-based installation
etc.
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Thanks, this is starting to look better, sorry about the big pile of comments, but it seemed useful at this point to get closer to the details.
- The `kubectl`CLI tool. You can use existing Kubernetes management tools (policy, quota, etc) to manage Knative workloads. | ||
- The Cloud Native Computing Foundation (CNCF) for which Knative is one of its projects, along with Kubernetes, Prometheus, and Istio. | ||
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Additionally, you should have cluster-admin permissions or equivalent to to install software and manage resources in all clusters in the namespace. |
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Additionally, you should have cluster-admin permissions or equivalent to to install software and manage resources in all clusters in the namespace. | |
Additionally, you should have cluster-admin permissions or equivalent to to install software and manage resources in all clusters in the namespace. |
(Link cluster-admin to kubernetes documentation, along with the other items like the Kubectl tool.)
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Write an Aministration Overview and finish up high-level remaining tasks for install docs.
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