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Co-authored-by: Kat Cosgrove <kat.cosgrove@gmail.com>

content/en/blog/_posts/2024-08-13-Kubernetes-v1-31-Release.md

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ One of the common problems with load balancers in Kubernetes is the synchronizat
 This feature implements a mechanism in kube-proxy for load balancers to do connection draining for terminating Nodes exposed by services of `type: LoadBalancer` and `externalTrafficPolicy: Cluster` and establish some best practices for cloud providers and Kubernetes load balancers implementations.
 
 To use this feature, kube-proxy needs to run as default service proxy on the cluster and the load balancer needs to support connection draining. 
-There are no specific changes required for using this feature, it has been enabled by default in kube-proxy since 1.30 and been promoted to stable in 1.31.
+There are no specific changes required for using this feature, it has been enabled by default in kube-proxy since v1.30 and been promoted to stable in v1.31.
 
 For more details about this feature please visit the [Virtual IPs and Service Proxies documentation page](/docs/reference/networking/virtual-ips/#external-traffic-policy).
 
@@ -108,9 +108,9 @@ This work was done as a part of [KEP #2644](https://github.com/kubernetes/enhanc
 
 ### Bound service account token improvements
 
-The `ServiceAccountTokenNodeBinding` feature is getting promoted to beta in 1.31. 
+The `ServiceAccountTokenNodeBinding` feature is promoted to beta in v1.31. 
 This feature allows requesting a token bound only to a node, not to a pod, which includes node information in claims in the token and validates the existence of the node when the token is used. 
-For more inforamtion, read the [bound service account tokens documentation](/docs/reference/access-authn-authz/service-accounts-admin/#bound-service-account-tokens).
+For more information, read the [bound service account tokens documentation](/docs/reference/access-authn-authz/service-accounts-admin/#bound-service-account-tokens).
 
 
 This work was done as part of [KEP #4193](https://github.com/kubernetes/enhancements/issues/4193) by [SIG Auth](https://github.com/kubernetes/community/tree/master/sig-auth).
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ This work was done as part of [KEP #1880](https://github.com/kubernetes/enhancem
 
 Traffic distribution for Services moves to beta in v1.31 and is enabled by default. 
 
-After several iterations on finding the best user experience and traffic engineering capabilities for Services networking, the SIG Networking implemented the `trafficDistribution` field in the Service specification, that serves as a guideline for the underlying implementation to consider while making routing decisions.
+After several iterations on finding the best user experience and traffic engineering capabilities for Services networking, SIG Networking implemented the `trafficDistribution` field in the Service specification, which serves as a guideline for the underlying implementation to consider while making routing decisions.
 
 For more details about this feature please read the
 [1.30 Release Blog](/blog/2024/04/17/kubernetes-v1-30-release/#traffic-distribution-for-services-sig-network-https-github-com-kubernetes-community-tree-master-sig-network)
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ This feature allows webhook authorizers and future (but not currently designed)
 allow **list** and **watch** requests, provided those requests use label and/or field selectors.
 For example, it is now possible for an authorizer to express: this user cannot list all pods, but can list all pods where `.spec.nodeName` matches some specific value. Or to allow a user to watch all Secrets in a namespace
 that are _not_ labelled as `confidential: true`.
-Combined with CRD field selectors (also moving to beta in 1.31), it is possible to write more secure
+Combined with CRD field selectors (also moving to beta in v1.31), it is possible to write more secure
 per-node extensions.
 
 This work was done as part of [KEP #4601](https://github.com/kubernetes/enhancements/issues/4601) by [SIG Auth](https://github.com/kubernetes/community/tree/master/sig-auth).
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ This shift aligns with the broader industry's move towards [cgroup v2](/docs/con
 Kubernetes maintance mode means that no new features will be added to cgroup v1 support. 
 Critical security fixes will still be provided, however, bug-fixing is now best-effort, meaning major bugs may be fixed if feasible, but some issues might remain unresolved.
 
-Its recommended that you start switching to use cgroup v2 as soon as possible. 
+It is recommended that you start switching to use cgroup v2 as soon as possible. 
 This transition depends on your architecture, including ensuring the underlying operating systems and container runtimes support cgroup v2 and testing workloads to verify that workloads and applications function correctly with cgroup v2.
 
 Please report any problems you encounter by filing an [issue](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/issues/new/choose).
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ The latter blog also contains useful information for users who need to migrate t
 
 #### Removal of in-tree provider feature gates
 
-In Kubernetes 1.31, the following alpha feature gates `InTreePluginAWSUnregister`, `InTreePluginAzureDiskUnregister`, `InTreePluginAzureFileUnregister`, `InTreePluginGCEUnregister`, `InTreePluginOpenStackUnregister`, and `InTreePluginvSphereUnregister` have been removed. These feature gates were introduced to facilitate the testing of scenarios where in-tree volume plugins were removed from the codebase, without actually removing them. Since Kubernetes 1.30 had deprecated these in-tree volume plugins, these feature gates were redundant and no longer served a purpose. The only CSI migration gate still standing is `InTreePluginPortworxUnregister`, which will remain in alpha until the CSI migration for Portworx is completed and its in-tree volume plugin will be ready for removal.
+In Kubernetes v1.31, the following alpha feature gates `InTreePluginAWSUnregister`, `InTreePluginAzureDiskUnregister`, `InTreePluginAzureFileUnregister`, `InTreePluginGCEUnregister`, `InTreePluginOpenStackUnregister`, and `InTreePluginvSphereUnregister` have been removed. These feature gates were introduced to facilitate the testing of scenarios where in-tree volume plugins were removed from the codebase, without actually removing them. Since Kubernetes 1.30 had deprecated these in-tree volume plugins, these feature gates were redundant and no longer served a purpose. The only CSI migration gate still standing is `InTreePluginPortworxUnregister`, which will remain in alpha until the CSI migration for Portworx is completed and its in-tree volume plugin will be ready for removal.
 
 
 #### Removal of kubelet `--keep-terminated-pod-volumes` command line flag
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ These plugins will be removed from the default scheduler plugins list as they ha
 
 ### Release notes and upgrade actions required
 
-Check out the full details of the Kubernetes 1.31 release in our [release notes](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/blob/master/CHANGELOG/CHANGELOG-1.31.md).
+Check out the full details of the Kubernetes v1.31 release in our [release notes](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/blob/master/CHANGELOG/CHANGELOG-1.31.md).
 
 #### Scheduler now uses QueueingHint when `SchedulerQueueingHints` is enabled
 Added support to the scheduler to start using a QueueingHint registered for Pod/Updated events,
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ You can find more details in the pull request [#122082](https://github.com/kuber
 
 Kubernetes v1.31 is available for download on [GitHub](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/releases/tag/v1.31.0) or on the [Kubernetes download page](/releases/download/). 
 
-To get started with Kubernetes, check out these [interactive tutorials](/docs/tutorials/) or run local Kubernetes clusters using [minikube](https://minikube.sigs.k8s.io/). You can also easily install 1.31 using [kubeadm](/docs/setup/independent/create-cluster-kubeadm/). 
+To get started with Kubernetes, check out these [interactive tutorials](/docs/tutorials/) or run local Kubernetes clusters using [minikube](https://minikube.sigs.k8s.io/). You can also easily install v1.31 using [kubeadm](/docs/setup/independent/create-cluster-kubeadm/). 
 
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