Copy updates for WNP134 [#15750] (#15785)

Also some minor code fixes I missed in review.
mozilla · Dec 20, 2024 · 2c1388b · 2c1388b
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diff --git a/bedrock/firefox/templates/firefox/whatsnew/whatsnew-fx134-ca.html b/bedrock/firefox/templates/firefox/whatsnew/whatsnew-fx134-ca.html
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
 
 {% if variant == '2' %}
   {% set title = 'Stay productive on the go' %}
-  {% set desc = 'Syncing your Firefox tabs across your devices means you can work, <br>read and shop whenever and wherever.'|safe %}
+  {% set desc = 'When you connect Firefox on all your devices, you can pull up an open tab from home<br> onto your phone and pick up where you left off.'|safe %}
 {% else %}
   {% set title = 'Privacy in your pocket' %}
-  {% set desc = 'You deserve privacy even when you’re in public. With Firefox on your phone, <br>you can trust you won’t be followed around online wherever you go.'|safe %}
+  {% set desc = 'You deserve privacy even when you’re in public. Browse on the go<br> without being followed with Firefox on your phone.'|safe %}
 {% endif %}
 
 {% if variant == '1' %}

diff --git a/bedrock/firefox/templates/firefox/whatsnew/whatsnew-fx134-gb.html b/bedrock/firefox/templates/firefox/whatsnew/whatsnew-fx134-gb.html
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
 
 {% if variant == '2' %}
   {% set title = 'Stay productive on the go' %}
-  {% set desc = 'Syncing your Firefox tabs across your devices means you can work, <br>read and shop whenever and wherever.'|safe %}
+  {% set desc = 'When you connect Firefox on all your devices, you can pull up an open tab from home<br> onto your phone and pick up where you left off.'|safe %}
 {% else %}
   {% set title = 'Privacy in your pocket' %}
-  {% set desc = 'You deserve privacy even when you’re in public. With Firefox on your phone, <br>you can trust you won’t be followed around online wherever you go.'|safe %}
+  {% set desc = 'You deserve privacy even when you’re in public. Browse on the go<br> without being followed with Firefox on your phone.'|safe %}
 {% endif %}
 
 {% if variant == '1' %}
@@ -39,6 +39,7 @@ <h1 class="wnp-main-title">{{ title }}</h1>
     {% with qrcode=qrcode, caption='Scan to get Firefox on your phone or tablet' %}
       {% include "firefox/whatsnew/includes/fx134/qrcode.html" %}
     {% endwith %}
+  </div>
 </section>
 
 <section class="wnp-footer">

diff --git a/bedrock/firefox/templates/firefox/whatsnew/whatsnew-fx134-us.html b/bedrock/firefox/templates/firefox/whatsnew/whatsnew-fx134-us.html
@@ -16,12 +16,10 @@
 
 {% if variant == '2' %}
   {% set title = 'Stay productive on the go' %}
-  {% set desc = 'Syncing your Firefox tabs across your devices means you can work, <br>read and shop whenever and wherever.'|safe %}
-  {% set qrcode = 'en-us-b' %}
+  {% set desc = 'When you connect Firefox on all your devices, you can pull up an open tab from home<br> onto your phone and pick up where you left off.'|safe %}
 {% else %}
   {% set title = 'Privacy in your pocket' %}
-  {% set desc = 'You deserve privacy even when you’re in public. With Firefox on your phone, <br>you can trust you won’t be followed around online wherever you go.'|safe %}
-  {% set qrcode = 'en-us-a' %}
+  {% set desc = 'You deserve privacy even when you’re in public. Browse on the go<br> without being followed with Firefox on your phone.'|safe %}
 {% endif %}
 
 {% if variant == '1' %}