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 ## Description
 
-MioCardMeow is a trans girl. People think of her as "very lovely and kind-hearted". Her mother said the same thing as well.
+MioCardMeow is a trans girl. People think of her as “very lovely and kind-hearted”. Her mother said the same thing as well.
 
-MioCardMeow's major is numerical control. She was also well-known as a translator of *Kanoguti* songs.
+MioCardMeow’s major is numerical control. She was also well-known as a translator of *Kanoguti* songs.
 
-She loved lovely skirts, and wore all kinds of stockings.
+She loved lovely skirts and wore all kinds of stockings.
 
 She was also skilled at cooking, and she always cooked delicious food.
 
-She liked to take photos of landscape. and recorded those beautiful moment of nature.
+She liked to take photos of landscapes.
+She recorded those beautiful moments of nature:
 
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-She knew how to use Tarot for divination. Although according to her friends, it seems that she often got bad predictions in divination.
+She knew how to use Tarot for divination. However, according to her friends, she often got bad predictions in divination.
 
-SugarMeow said, in fact, MioCardMeow was in fact a clingy girl. It was a pity that she couldn't be with her more due to her studies.
+SugarMeow said MioCardMeow was in fact a clingy girl. It was a pity that she couldn't be with her more due to her studies.
 
 ## Departure
 
-Her hostile family and negative impact of long-term medication (pituitary adenoma) gave rise to her suicidal thoughts. She passed away after an unsuccessful resuscitation.
+Her hostile family and the negative impact of long-term medications (pituitary adenoma) gave rise to her suicidal thoughts. She passed away after an unsuccessful resuscitation.
 
 Her departure was reported by [Miao Xiao Bai](https://twitter.com/pizyj/status/1492928433172582400?s=21) on February 14th, 2022.
 
 ## After Her Leaving
 
-MioCardMeow had a good friendship with SugarMeow. After her departure, SugarMeow inherited her nickname in order to remember her.
+MioCardMeow had a good friendship with SugarMeow. After her departure, SugarMeow inherited her nickname to remember her.
 
-> I am afraid of forgetting her... I like her a lot. She was lovely, gentle, polite... and she always took care of me...
+> I am afraid of forgetting her… I like her a lot. She was lovely, gentle, polite… and she always took care of me…
 
 Contributors for this entry: [SugarMeow](https://space.bilibili.com/618333512), [Asaka Minamikawa](https://twitter.com/GE90Start), [Lee](https://twitter.com/rbqwansui), One-Among-Us