Merge pull request #4878 from owncloud/relnotes-proofreading

Update server_release_notes.adoc

modules/ROOT/pages/server_release_notes.adoc

@@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ Metadata coming from storages are stored in the database. Previously, when a sto
 
 2-factor authentication can be enforced now. The feature requires at least one app implementing 2-factor authentication, otherwise no enforcement will be done. If 2-factor authentication is enforced, all users will be required to use a 2-factor authentication app. Some specific groups selected by the admin can be excluded to let those users bypass 2-factor authentication. https://github.com/owncloud/core/pull/40830[#40830]
 
-=== Setting up Federation Sharing over the Web UI Is Again Possible
+=== Setting up Federation Sharing over the Web UI Can Use Trusted Servers Again
 
-After an update of the guzzle library in previous core versions, it was no longer possible to set up federation sharing over the Web UI because of the wrong format used during the token exchange phase. We now explicitly set the format to be json so that the exchange is correctly done. https://github.com/owncloud/core/pull/40815[#40815]
+After an update of the guzzle library in previous core versions, it was no longer possible to set up new trusted server relations for federated sharing over the Web UI because of the wrong format used during the token exchange phase. We now explicitly set the format to be json so that the exchange is correctly done. https://github.com/owncloud/core/pull/40815[#40815]
 
 === Add Commands to Handle Trusted Servers from the Command Line
 
@@ -126,11 +126,11 @@ Background jobs can be no longer valid because they are from an old version of a
 
 Previously, the user list was sorted in the browser. This was causing confusion because the sorting happened without taking into account all the items, so there were some weird effects. There is no sorting in the browser now. The server is expected to return the list of users already sorted, so the browser just needs to show the list. https://github.com/owncloud/core/pull/40840[#40840]
 
-=== Remove the `add group` button from the dropdowns in the users page
+=== Remove the `add group` Button from the Dropdowns in the Users Page
 
 The `add group` button has been removed from the dropdowns because the behavior was confusing. You can still create new groups in the users page by using the `add group` button in the top left corner of the users page. The dropdowns will only select existing groups, but they won't add new groups. https://github.com/owncloud/core/pull/40770[#40770]
 
-=== Require firebase/php-jwt in core
+=== Require firebase/php-jwt in Core
 
 firebase/php-jwt version 6 is now part of core and all apps can rely on it. https://github.com/owncloud/core/pull/40901[#40901]
 
@@ -162,26 +162,26 @@ Find below a list of updated apps in comparison with the 10.12.2 complete bundle
 
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/activity [Activity] 2.7.2
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/admin_audit [Auditing] 2.1.4
-* https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/configreport [ConfigReport] 0.2.2
+* https://github.com/owncloud/configreport/releases [ConfigReport] 0.2.2
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/customgroups [Custom Groups] 0.7.2
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/diagnostics [Diagnostics] 0.2.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/drawio [Drawio] 1.0.1
-* https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/encryption [Default encryption module] 1.6.1
+* https://github.com/owncloud/encryption/releases [Default encryption module] 1.6.1
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/files_antivirus [Anti-Virus] 1.2.2
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/files_classifier [Document Classification] 1.4.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/files_lifecycle [File Lifecycle Management] 1.3.4
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/files_primary_s3 [S3 Primary Object Storage] 1.5.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/files_texteditor [Text Editor] 2.6.0
-* https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/firstrunwizard [First run wizard] 1.3.0
+* https://github.com/owncloud/firstrunwizard/releases [First run wizard] 1.3.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/impersonate [Impersonate] 0.5.3
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/kerberos [Kerberos Integration] 1.0.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/market [Market] 0.8.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/metrics [Metrics] 1.4.0
-* https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/notifications [Notifications] 0.6.0
+* https://github.com/owncloud/notifications/releases [Notifications] 0.6.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/oauth2 [OAuth2] 0.6.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/password_policy [Password Policy] 2.2.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/ransomware_protection [Ransomware Protection] 1.7.0
-* https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/updater [Updater] 1.1.0
+* https://github.com/owncloud/updater/releases [Updater] 1.1.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/user_ldap [LDAP Integration] 0.18.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/user_shibboleth [SAML/SSO Integration] 3.6.0
 * https://marketplace.owncloud.com/apps/web [Web] 7.0.3