python · Yhg1s · Sep 26, 2023 · Sep 25, 2023
diff --git a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ asyncio
  writing to sockets and uses :meth:`~socket.socket.sendmsg` if the platform
  supports it. (Contributed by Kumar Aditya in :gh:`91166`.)
 
-* Added :func:`asyncio.eager_task_factory` and :func:`asyncio.create_eager_task_factory`
+* Add :func:`asyncio.eager_task_factory` and :func:`asyncio.create_eager_task_factory`
  functions to allow opting an event loop in to eager task execution,
  making some use-cases 2x to 5x faster.
  (Contributed by Jacob Bower & Itamar Oren in :gh:`102853`, :gh:`104140`, and :gh:`104138`)
@@ -669,17 +669,17 @@ inspect
 itertools
 ---------
 
-* Added :class:`itertools.batched()` for collecting into even-sized
+* Add :class:`itertools.batched()` for collecting into even-sized
  tuples where the last batch may be shorter than the rest.
  (Contributed by Raymond Hettinger in :gh:`98363`.)
 
 math
 ----
 
-* Added :func:`math.sumprod` for computing a sum of products.
+* Add :func:`math.sumprod` for computing a sum of products.
  (Contributed by Raymond Hettinger in :gh:`100485`.)
 
-* Extended :func:`math.nextafter` to include a *steps* argument
+* Extend :func:`math.nextafter` to include a *steps* argument
  for moving up or down multiple steps at a time.
  (By Matthias Goergens, Mark Dickinson, and Raymond Hettinger in :gh:`94906`.)
 
@@ -752,10 +752,10 @@ pdb
 random
 ------
 
-* Added :func:`random.binomialvariate`.
+* Add :func:`random.binomialvariate`.
  (Contributed by Raymond Hettinger in :gh:`81620`.)
 
-* Added a default of ``lamb=1.0`` to :func:`random.expovariate`.
+* Add a default of ``lamb=1.0`` to :func:`random.expovariate`.
  (Contributed by Raymond Hettinger in :gh:`100234`.)
 
 shutil
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ sqlite3
 statistics
 ----------
 
-* Extended :func:`statistics.correlation` to include as a ``ranked`` method
+* Extend :func:`statistics.correlation` to include as a ``ranked`` method
  for computing the Spearman correlation of ranked data.
  (Contributed by Raymond Hettinger in :gh:`95861`.)
 
@@ -952,7 +952,7 @@ unicodedata
 unittest
 --------
 
-Added ``--durations`` command line option, showing the N slowest test cases::
+Add a ``--durations`` command line option, showing the N slowest test cases::
 
  python3 -m unittest --durations=3 lib.tests.test_threading
  .....
@@ -980,11 +980,11 @@ uuid
 Optimizations
 =============
 
-* Removed ``wstr`` and ``wstr_length`` members from Unicode objects.
+* Remove ``wstr`` and ``wstr_length`` members from Unicode objects.
  It reduces object size by 8 or 16 bytes on 64bit platform. (:pep:`623`)
  (Contributed by Inada Naoki in :gh:`92536`.)
 
-* Added experimental support for using the BOLT binary optimizer in the build
+* Add experimental support for using the BOLT binary optimizer in the build
  process, which improves performance by 1-5%.
  (Contributed by Kevin Modzelewski in :gh:`90536` and tuned by Donghee Na in :gh:`101525`)
 
@@ -1017,7 +1017,7 @@ CPython bytecode changes
 * Remove the :opcode:`!JUMP_IF_FALSE_OR_POP` and :opcode:`!JUMP_IF_TRUE_OR_POP`
  instructions. (Contributed by Irit Katriel in :gh:`102859`.)
 
-* Removed the :opcode:`!PRECALL` instruction. (Contributed by Mark Shannon in
+* Remove the :opcode:`!PRECALL` instruction. (Contributed by Mark Shannon in
  :gh:`92925`.)
 
 * Add the :opcode:`LOAD_FAST_AND_CLEAR` instruction as part of the
@@ -1443,9 +1443,9 @@ imp
  loader.exec_module(module)
  return module
 
-* Removed :mod:`!imp` functions and attributes with no replacements:
+* Remove :mod:`!imp` functions and attributes with no replacements:
 
- * undocumented functions:
+ * Undocumented functions:
 
  * ``imp.init_builtin()``
  * ``imp.load_compiled()``
@@ -1526,7 +1526,7 @@ ssl
 unittest
 --------
 
-* Removed many old deprecated :mod:`unittest` features:
+* Remove many long-deprecated :mod:`unittest` features:
 
  * A number of :class:`~unittest.TestCase` method aliases:
 
@@ -1569,7 +1569,7 @@ webbrowser
 ----------
 
 * Remove support for obsolete browsers from :mod:`webbrowser`.
- Removed browsers include: Grail, Mosaic, Netscape, Galeon, Skipstone,
+ The removed browsers include: Grail, Mosaic, Netscape, Galeon, Skipstone,
  Iceape, Firebird, and Firefox versions 35 and below (:gh:`102871`).
 
 xml.etree.ElementTree
@@ -1592,8 +1592,8 @@ zipimport
 Others
 ------
 
-* Removed the ``suspicious`` rule from the documentation :file:`Makefile`, and
- removed ``Doc/tools/rstlint.py``, both in favor of `sphinx-lint
+* Remove the ``suspicious`` rule from the documentation :file:`Makefile` and
+ :file:`Doc/tools/rstlint.py`, both in favor of `sphinx-lint
  <https://github.com/sphinx-contrib/sphinx-lint>`_.
  (Contributed by Julien Palard in :gh:`98179`.)
 
@@ -1623,7 +1623,7 @@ Changes in the Python API
  contain ASCII letters and digits and underscore.
  (Contributed by Serhiy Storchaka in :gh:`91760`.)
 
-* Removed ``randrange()`` functionality deprecated since Python 3.10. Formerly,
+* Remove ``randrange()`` functionality deprecated since Python 3.10. Formerly,
  ``randrange(10.0)`` losslessly converted to ``randrange(10)``. Now, it raises a
  :exc:`TypeError`. Also, the exception raised for non-integer values such as
  ``randrange(10.5)`` or ``randrange('10')`` has been changed from :exc:`ValueError` to
@@ -1637,7 +1637,7 @@ Changes in the Python API
  to :term:`filesystem encoding and error handler`.
  Argument files should be encoded in UTF-8 instead of ANSI Codepage on Windows.
 
-* Removed the ``asyncore``-based ``smtpd`` module deprecated in Python 3.4.7
+* Remove the ``asyncore``-based ``smtpd`` module deprecated in Python 3.4.7
  and 3.5.4. A recommended replacement is the
  :mod:`asyncio`-based aiosmtpd_ PyPI module.
 
@@ -1764,7 +1764,7 @@ New Features
 ------------
 
 
-* :pep:`697`: Introduced the :ref:`Unstable C API tier <unstable-c-api>`,
+* :pep:`697`: Introduce the :ref:`Unstable C API tier <unstable-c-api>`,
  intended for low-level tools like debuggers and JIT compilers.
  This API may change in each minor release of CPython without deprecation
  warnings.
@@ -1786,7 +1786,7 @@ New Features
 
  (Contributed by Petr Viktorin in :gh:`101101`.)
 
-* :pep:`697`: Added API for extending types whose instance memory layout is
+* :pep:`697`: Add an API for extending types whose instance memory layout is
  opaque:
 
  - :c:member:`PyType_Spec.basicsize` can be zero or negative to specify
@@ -1801,7 +1801,7 @@ New Features
 
  (Contributed by Petr Viktorin in :gh:`103509`.)
 
-* Added the new :ref:`limited C API <limited-c-api>` function :c:func:`PyType_FromMetaclass`,
+* Add the new :ref:`limited C API <limited-c-api>` function :c:func:`PyType_FromMetaclass`,
  which generalizes the existing :c:func:`PyType_FromModuleAndSpec` using
  an additional metaclass argument.
  (Contributed by Wenzel Jakob in :gh:`93012`.)
@@ -1840,13 +1840,13 @@ New Features
  protocol are now available in the :ref:`Limited API <stable>`. (Contributed
  by Wenzel Jakob in :gh:`98586`.)
 
-* Added two new public functions,
+* Add two new public functions,
  :c:func:`PyEval_SetProfileAllThreads` and
  :c:func:`PyEval_SetTraceAllThreads`, that allow to set tracing and profiling
  functions in all running threads in addition to the calling one. (Contributed
  by Pablo Galindo in :gh:`93503`.)
 
-* Added new function :c:func:`PyFunction_SetVectorcall` to the C API
+* Add new function :c:func:`PyFunction_SetVectorcall` to the C API
  which sets the vectorcall field of a given :c:type:`PyFunctionObject`.
  (Contributed by Andrew Frost in :gh:`92257`.)
 
@@ -1856,11 +1856,11 @@ New Features
  compilers, or debuggers.
  (Contributed by Carl Meyer in :gh:`91052`.)
 
-* Added :c:func:`PyType_AddWatcher` and :c:func:`PyType_Watch` API to register
+* Add :c:func:`PyType_AddWatcher` and :c:func:`PyType_Watch` API to register
  callbacks to receive notification on changes to a type.
  (Contributed by Carl Meyer in :gh:`91051`.)
 
-* Added :c:func:`PyCode_AddWatcher` and :c:func:`PyCode_ClearWatcher`
+* Add :c:func:`PyCode_AddWatcher` and :c:func:`PyCode_ClearWatcher`
  APIs to register callbacks to receive notification on creation and
  destruction of code objects.
  (Contributed by Itamar Oren in :gh:`91054`.)
@@ -1890,8 +1890,8 @@ New Features
  to replace the legacy-api :c:func:`!PyErr_Display`. (Contributed by
  Irit Katriel in :gh:`102755`).
 
-* :pep:`683`: Introduced Immortal Objects to Python which allows objects
- to bypass reference counts and introduced changes to the C-API:
+* :pep:`683`: Introduce *Immortal Objects*, which allows objects
+ to bypass reference counts, and related changes to the C-API:
 
  - ``_Py_IMMORTAL_REFCNT``: The reference count that defines an object
  as immortal.
@@ -1908,7 +1908,7 @@ New Features
 
  (Contributed by Eddie Elizondo in :gh:`84436`.)
 
-* :pep:`684`: Added the new :c:func:`Py_NewInterpreterFromConfig`
+* :pep:`684`: Add the new :c:func:`Py_NewInterpreterFromConfig`
  function and :c:type:`PyInterpreterConfig`, which may be used
  to create sub-interpreters with their own GILs.
  (See :ref:`whatsnew312-pep684` for more info.)
@@ -1957,7 +1957,7 @@ Porting to Python 3.12
  copied as-is to the result string, and any extra arguments discarded.
  (Contributed by Serhiy Storchaka in :gh:`95781`.)
 
-* Fixed wrong sign placement in :c:func:`PyUnicode_FromFormat` and
+* Fix wrong sign placement in :c:func:`PyUnicode_FromFormat` and
  :c:func:`PyUnicode_FromFormatV`.
  (Contributed by Philip Georgi in :gh:`95504`.)