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Moving the Building Levels quest form to Jetpack Compose. #6022
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Spotted a couple flaws, fixing |
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Hey, thank you for that contribution!
For being new to Compose, you are already doing a lot of things correctly, IMO.
Here's a small pre-review, without having looked at how it looks like in the app:
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Some formatting could be improved. I think ktlint could help you there, @FloEdelmann is the expert regarding that. Things like space after
if
, space before{
, space around operators like!=
, space after,
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For things like buttons (AddBuildingLevelsButton), try to use standard components. Doesn't using
Button
as the container for the row of text, image, text produce a satisfactory result? The issues with defining your own shapes resembling buttons are amongst other things 1. doesn't look right in dark mode, 2. no tap (ripple) feedback, 3. isn't changed automatically when app-wide theme changes are made (such as using Material 3 instead of Material 2) -
avoid specifying the font size directly, use styles wherever possible, e.g.
style = MaterialTheme.typography.caption
orMaterialTheme.typography.body2
(See theTypography
class for the available text styles in Material2). Same goes for other styling, e.g. regarding colors (for errors etc). -
Are you sure about
wrapContentSize
/wrapContentWidth
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don't put compose code into fragments. So there's this levels+roof levels input field? That's one widget, put it into an own file! So there is this form consisting of the mentioned input field plus a row of previous-selection buttons? Put that into yet another file! There's that row of previous-selection buttons? Put that at least into its own function.
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For the levels+roof levels input, you want to hoist the state, see https://developer.android.com/develop/ui/compose/state#state-hoisting . I.e. the function should take the levels as normal String parameters and instead have a function
onValuesChanged
or similar to report the changed value(s) to the parent. Basically, howTextField
works, too.
re 5: so split it out into sections a bit more? got it. |
Well, you have several paddings there in nested composables (of which some are not necessary, by the way). But if it really doesn't work out at all, you should use |
Converting this back to draft while I work on the issues presented. thankyou for the points! :) |
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Moved out of draft, ran ktlint over the files I changed now, moved it to it's own file, and moved the row to it's own file. and moved MaterialTheme.color and MaterialTheme.Typography |
So, is this ready to review/merge? Or do you want to review it yourself, first? Some small things like formatting etc. one might notice oneself. |
Should be ready I think |
app/src/main/java/de/westnordost/streetcomplete/quests/building_levels/AddBuildingLevelsForm.kt
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Co-authored-by: Flo Edelmann <git@flo-edelmann.de>
Thankyou @FloEdelmann Co-authored-by: Flo Edelmann <git@flo-edelmann.de>
Thankyou for the reviewed changes @FloEdelmann you are right that looks much better! |
- formatting fixes (i.e. make consistent with rest of codebase) - re-did building illustration (centered, less wide) - renamed some functions/classes - made the building illustration extend to the left and right - BuildingLevelsForm: removed unnecessary box, nicely aligned layout, outlined text fields look better - BuildingLevelsButton: removed hardcoded text size, fixed layout - added doc comments - fixed for RTL layout direction - preview functions should be private + consistent naming - other small things
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Overall, it looks pretty good! You did a lot of things in Compose right, right away.
There are a many small things, so I rather worked on these myself then to complain about (and explain) all these. If you like to learn, have a look at what I changed.
Some general things specially for StreetComplete:
- max line width is 100 chars
- previews should be private
- I usually add a short documentation comment for every public composable
- formatting should be consistent: if it fits in one line, fine, if not, expand not like this
Row(modifier = Modifier
.height(52.dp), verticalAlignment = Alignment.CenterVertically) {
but like this
Row(
modifier = Modifier.height(52.dp),
verticalAlignment = Alignment.CenterVertically
) {
Some general things for Compose:
- gotta check if it works well in right-to-left layouts.
- for paddings between items in a Row, Column, LazyRow etc., use the *Arrangement parameter (e.g.
horizontalArrangement = Arrangement.spacedBy(16.dp)
) - public composables should always have a
Modifier
parameter, for consistency. This parameter should always be passed to the immediate child composable - The items function in LazyRow and LazyColumn has an overload that allows you to directly pass a List, so that's a little more convenient than with indices
- check out https://developer.android.com/develop/ui/compose/layouts/intrinsic-measurements for e.g. expanding the height of an element to the maximum height within a row. Very handy. The article explains why fillMaxHeight() is often not what one wants
I didn't review the But the outline is:
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Note to myself: It would be great if there was some indicator whether a list of "favourite" buttons like the BuildingLevelsButton can be scrolled horizontally. How is this usually indicated? How is it usually done one iOS? If there is no common standard, look for if someone else already implemented something like this (if the lib is popular, that can become the standard). Otherwise, implement it oneself, can be used for many scrollable views, also in the tutorial etc. Ideas for how it could look like, if no standard exists:
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