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Editors to figure out text on line items #477

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zkoch opened this issue Mar 24, 2017 · 2 comments · Fixed by #670
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Editors to figure out text on line items #477

zkoch opened this issue Mar 24, 2017 · 2 comments · Fixed by #670
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zkoch commented Mar 24, 2017

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Here's one idea for consideration. Old:

"For example, it might include details of products or breakdown of tax and shipping."

New:

"For example, it might include a breakdown of tax and shipping."

(Example 3 shows this sort of usage.)

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zkoch commented Apr 5, 2017

Chatting at editor meeting, preferred route is to remove this sentence and add something in the privacy section about not sharing this data.

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